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by vimmi singh on November 22, 2012, 06:15:43 AM
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Its not a poetry... just my frustration and feeling sorry too... jeene ki chaah nahi rahi bs

Mujhko yun jhinjhodo naa
Meri bhi ek soch hai
apni marzi se chalne do
Ab aur mujhe  ghasito naa
Yun  soch par taale lagakar
Chaabhi mujhse chhupaana  naa
tanha hi rah jaane do
Apne ummid ki chaashni me
Mujhko tum gholo naa
Mere dard ko bhi khulne do
Frustration  me yun chhedo naa
Mujhko yun jhinjhodo naa

Main bhi kuchh hun
Mujhko bhi samjho naa
Laakh koshish rahi
Is dunia me tikne ki
Har mod pe ghut’ti rahi
Ab aur naa chahat jine ki
So jaaun toh sone dena
Fir mujhko uthaana naa
Har chahat pe tadpi hun
Aur koi tadpaana naa..
Ab mujhe so jaane do naa
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2012, 06:33:36 AM »
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boht boht boht dard aur acha lilkha hai
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2012, 06:49:23 AM »
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Aapne bahut saleeke se apna dard bayan kiya hai... bahut khoob...

ye char lines sirf aapke liye:-

Dar kar duniya se jo jeene ka haunsla bhool jate hain.
Wahi kar pate hain himmat jindagi ko kuch alag dhang se jeene ki.

Karo kuch haunsla tum bhi, hum sath hain tumhare.
Dikha do jamaane ko ki ham me bhi hai kabiliyat,
Tumhare diye dardon ko peene ki...

Kehte bhi hain ki-
Muskura kar gam ka jehar jinko peena aa gaya,
Ye sach hai ki jahan me unko jeena aa gaya.
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«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2012, 08:16:29 AM »
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Itni gahrai me aap ne apne dard ka byan kiya hai ki kuch bhi likha nahi ja raha ....bas itna kahu ga bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2012, 09:17:55 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut gehre ehsaas
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«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2012, 11:04:53 AM »
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boht boht boht dard aur acha lilkha hai
shukriya saahill ji.........
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«Reply #6 on: November 22, 2012, 01:05:58 PM »
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Aapne bahut saleeke se apna dard bayan kiya hai... bahut khoob...

ye char lines sirf aapke liye:-

Dar kar duniya se jo jeene ka haunsla bhool jate hain.
Wahi kar pate hain himmat jindagi ko kuch alag dhang se jeene ki.

Karo kuch haunsla tum bhi, hum sath hain tumhare.
Dikha do jamaane ko ki ham me bhi hai kabiliyat,
Tumhare diye dardon ko peene ki...

Kehte bhi hain ki-
Muskura kar gam ka jehar jinko peena aa gaya,
Ye sach hai ki jahan me unko jeena aa gaya.
Thanks a lot Sunil ji.... aapke is khayaalaat ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #7 on: November 22, 2012, 05:09:50 PM »
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Itni gahrai me aap ne apne dard ka byan kiya hai ki kuch bhi likha nahi ja raha ....bas itna kahu ga bahut bahut khoob
shukriya Anmol ji...........
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mkv
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«Reply #8 on: November 22, 2012, 05:17:11 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne vimmy jee
you deserve the appreciation for this
par introductory lines..?
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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2012, 10:52:13 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut gehre ehsaas
thank you aqsh ji........
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2012, 11:21:58 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne vimmy jee
you deserve the appreciation for this
par introductory lines..?

thank you mkv ji......
Its true......
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