aa chal aansman pe koodein...

by aru12 on April 15, 2013, 07:40:34 PM
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Aa chal aansmaan pe koodein,
Uchal ke fir chaand ko todein,
Baadlon pe girein to boodon pe fislein,
Unke saath utar, jameen ko choomein,

Pakad mera haath, chal titliyon pe
baithen,
Foolon ke ras ko hun bhi choosein,
Bhar ke use munh mein apne ,
Bhanware kee tarah hum bhi jhoomein,

Dekhte ho kya, chal taaron ko todein,
Bhar ke jeb, jholi ko kholein,
Hogi na raat kabhi jebo mein apne,
Soch ke ye hum khush ho lein,

Sookha hai to chal os mein naha lein,
Baki jo bache to use baha dein,
Girti hai roj subah bina nal khole,
Naha kar chidiyon kee tarah chahchaha lein...
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2013, 07:51:31 PM »
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Kya Khoob Likha Hai. Dheron Daad. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2013, 10:06:15 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2013, 02:36:11 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2013, 04:22:51 AM »
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Aa chal aansmaan pe koodein,
Uchal ke fir chaand ko todein,
Baadlon pe girein to boodon pe fislein,
Unke saath utar, jameen ko choomein,

Pakad mera haath, chal titliyon pe
baithen,
Foolon ke ras ko hun bhi choosein,
Bhar ke use munh mein apne ,
Bhanware kee tarah hum bhi jhoomein,

Dekhte ho kya, chal taaron ko todein,
Bhar ke jeb, jholi ko kholein,
Hogi na raat kabhi jebo mein apne,
Soch ke ye hum khush ho lein,

Sookha hai to chal os mein naha lein,
Baki jo bache to use baha dein,
Girti hai roj subah bina nal khole,
Naha kar chidiyon kee tarah chahchaha lein...


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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2013, 04:33:03 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob aru ji. bahut achcha likha hai aapne. dheron daad.
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2013, 10:15:54 PM »
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thanx dk saxena jee...
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2013, 09:50:05 AM »
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thanx anush jee.....
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