aaj chidiya ban jane ka man hai .. charan..

by lovely_charan on June 11, 2013, 03:13:28 PM
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aaj chidiya ban jane ka man hai..
par pankh nahi, door gagan hai..
huyi dil ke darwaje pe dastak..
koi hai ya man ka ek bharam hai..

aaj chidiya ban jane ka man hai..
par pankh nahi, door gagan hai..

natmastak dekho har man hai..
nache mor, dhara -gagan hai..
inke sang main bhi toh gaa lun..
man mera bhi aaj magan hai..

aaj chidiya ban jane ka man hai..
par pankh nahi, door gagan hai..
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2013, 03:20:52 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2013, 03:49:46 PM »
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thank u jee
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2013, 05:56:25 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai..keep writing..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2013, 06:19:12 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2013, 06:33:35 PM »
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bahut sundar
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aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2013, 07:45:20 PM »
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aaj chidiya ban jane ka man hai..
par pankh nahi, door gagan hai..
huyi dil ke darwaje pe dastak..
koi hai ya man ka ek bharam hai..

aaj chidiya ban jane ka man hai..
par pankh nahi, door gagan hai..

natmastak dekho har man hai..
nache mor, dhara -gagan hai..
inke sang main bhi toh gaa lun..
man mera bhi aaj magan hai..

aaj chidiya ban jane ka man hai..
par pankh nahi, door gagan hai..
waah charan ji khoobsoorat ehsaas adhuri khawahish Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2013, 08:22:36 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob charanji. likhti rahiye. dheron daad.
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2013, 09:00:42 PM »
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wah wah wah .. bada khoobsurat khayaal, bahut khoob, wah

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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2013, 02:28:46 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob charan ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2013, 06:29:17 PM »
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