Aukat vich rakhi mere malka.........

by Gurpreet singh longia on November 15, 2012, 01:33:00 PM
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Jaan nalo vadh ke pyari rakhni
hik nal kaim sardari rakhni
AUKAT vich rakhi mere malka is bande nu
jo sda chardiya klava bakhshe is bande nu.!!!!!!!!

Yar hove dildar hove
paave bhain hove , pra hove
lok hove parlok hove
paave duniya vich vasya har ik shakhsh hove
bs rishteya di sanjh nu bnai rakhi mere malka
menu meri aukat vich rakhi mere malka.!!! Rakhi mere malka.!!!!!!!

                            je arz kabul hoi hove ta please comment on it.!!!!!!!!!!!


                           by ........ Gurpreet singh longia
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2012, 01:49:15 PM »
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Quote from: Gurpreet singh longia on November 15, 2012, 01:33:00 PM
Jaan nalo vadh ke pyari rakhni
hik nal kaim sardari rakhni
AUKAT vich rakhi mere malka is bande nu
jo sda chardiya klava bakhshe is bande nu.!!!!!!!!

Yar hove dildar hove
paave bhain hove , pra hove
lok hove parlok hove
paave duniya vich vasya har ik shakhsh hove
bs rishteya di sanjh nu bnai rakhi mere malka
menu meri aukat vich rakhi mere malka.!!! Rakhi mere malka.!!!!!!!

                            je arz kabul hoi hove ta please comment on it.!!!!!!!!!!!


                           by ........ Gurpreet singh longia





Bahut bahut Vadhaiyan Gurpreet Ji...

Jaan nalo vadh ke pyari rakhni
hik nal kaim sardari rakhni

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 happy3 thank u khwaish ji.!!!!!!
               
                i m really thankful to you for this encoragement and appreciation given by u.!!!!!!!! happy3
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 happy3   thank u nandbahu ji.!!!!! I m really greatful to u .!!!!
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