Baag ko fir sey kyaa huaa hai, zaraa deykho to?

by abdbundeli on June 07, 2009, 08:34:52 AM
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Baag ko fir sey kyaa huaa hai, zaraa deykho to?
Arsh sey aisaa kyaa chuaa hai, zaraa deykho to?
Aaj gulbun to hai, gunchey hain nadaarad leykin;
Baad-e-mashriq ko kyaa huaa hai, zaraa deykho to?

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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2009, 08:45:34 AM »
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Wooow Lovely

Baag ko aaj tazi hawaon ne chua hai, zara dekho toh
Aaj barson se banjer zameen mehek raha hai, zara dekho toh
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2009, 09:07:29 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 07, 2009, 08:45:34 AM
Wooow Lovely

Baag ko aaj tazi hawaon ne chua hai, zara dekho toh
Aaj barson se banjer zameen mehek raha hai, zara dekho toh

Thanks Roja!

Mujhey khushee hai, baag mein bahaar aayee hai!
Khairmaqdam ho: lout kar phuhaar aayee hai!
Un key ounthhoun pai khileyngey gul-e-gulaab kayee;
Baad-e-mashriq tabhee dar ko buhaar aayee hai!!
       
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2009, 05:11:32 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai..... Superb Lines....

Very Well Replied.. Roja Sweetz
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2009, 02:44:56 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 07, 2009, 05:11:32 PM
Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai..... Superb Lines....

Very Well Replied.. Roja Sweetz
Thanks a lot Sophi!
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2009, 01:51:19 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB ABD AND ROJA JEE..
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2009, 04:43:31 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on June 22, 2009, 01:51:19 AM
BAHUT KHOOB ABD AND ROJA JEE..
Thanks a lot, pandit ji!
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2009, 06:24:09 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 07, 2009, 08:34:52 AM
Baag ko fir sey kyaa huaa hai, zaraa deykho to?
Arsh sey aisaa kyaa chuaa hai, zaraa deykho to?
Aaj gulbun to hai, gunchey hain nadaarad leykin;
Baad-e-mashriq ko kyaa huaa hai, zaraa deykho to?

                                     - abd bundeli


again gud one abd jee
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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2009, 06:31:00 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 07, 2009, 09:07:29 AM
Thanks Roja!

Mujhey khushee hai, baag mein bahaar aayee hai!
Khairmaqdam ho: lout kar phuhaar aayee hai!
Un key ounthhoun pai khileyngey gul-e-gulaab kayee;
Baad-e-mashriq tabhee dar ko buhaar aayee hai!!
       
                                   - abd bundeli

Wah... Nice again Uncle ji  Usual Smile

Yaad aao tum kabhi is tarah ke mann gungunane lage
Kabhi ishq ladao is tarah, ke dil tera nagme gane lage


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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2009, 06:31:32 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI ROJA JE..
BAHUT ACHA SAATH DIYA HAI..
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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2009, 07:02:28 AM »
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very nice and wonderful creation Abd ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
beautiful lines by you Roja ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2009, 07:27:31 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on June 23, 2009, 06:24:09 AM
again gud one abd jee
Shukriyah, pandit ji!
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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2009, 07:40:37 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 23, 2009, 06:31:00 AM
Wah... Nice again Uncle ji  Usual Smile

Yaad aao tum kabhi is tarah ke mann gungunane lage
Kabhi ishq ladao is tarah, ke dil tera nagme gane lage


Waah! Thanks a lot, Roja!

Gungunaatey hain parindey, khushee manaatey hain!
Gungunaatey hain patingey, khushee manaatey hain!
Hijra mein chashm-e-tar chhalak na jaayen anjaaney;
Is liye un ko bachaaney ko gungunaatey hain!!

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«Reply #13 on: June 23, 2009, 07:44:36 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 23, 2009, 07:02:28 AM
very nice and wonderful creation Abd ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
beautiful lines by you Roja ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriyah Madhu!
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«Reply #14 on: July 21, 2009, 10:21:44 AM »
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