barish ka mosam

by chitralsony on August 12, 2009, 04:28:18 AM
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yay barish ka mosam satata bhot hai
yay sawan hamay yun azmata bhot hai
yay nadi ka pani yay jharnay ka naghma
na janay kyun dil ko bhata bhot hai
yay nam hokay barish kai pani mai mati
mairay rooh tak ko mehkata bhot hai
yay sham e odasi yay beega sa mosam
mujko tanhayi ka ehsas dilata bhot hai
tasaver hina oska aysay mai akay
is baichain dil ko rulata bhot hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2009, 04:48:25 AM »
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very nice and wonderful creation Chitra ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.
keep it up.
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2009, 05:58:17 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI.....CHITRALSONY JI.......

YEH BAARISH KA MAUSAM MUJHE BHAATA BAHUT HAIN,
YEH SAWAN HAMEY YAAD AATA BAHUT HAIN,

YEH NADI KA PANI,JAHAN BEETI  JAWANI,
IS NADI KE KINARE, KOI BANI THI MERI DEWAANI.

BEEGI MEETI KI KHUSHBU,BEEGA KUDRAT KA NAZAARA,
DIL KO MERE KHUSH KAR JAATA BAHUT HAIN.

YRH BAARISH KA MAUSAM MUJHE BHAATA BAHUT HAIN,
YEH SAWAN HAMEY YAAD AATA BAHUT HAIN.
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2009, 06:02:12 AM »
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Bahut khoob Cara ji beautiful lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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chitralsony
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2009, 09:53:43 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 12, 2009, 04:48:25 AM
very nice and wonderful creation Chitra ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.
keep it up.
thank u so much madho
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2009, 02:39:18 PM »
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Waah Taiba Sis bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai

Cara ji aapne bhi bahoot Khoob reply kiya hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2009, 02:43:29 PM »
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Quote from: chitralsony on August 12, 2009, 04:28:18 AM
yay barish ka mosam satata bhot hai
yay sawan hamay yun azmata bhot hai
yay nadi ka pani yay jharnay ka naghma
na janay kyun dil ko bhata bhot hai
yay nam hokay barish kai pani mai mati
mairay rooh tak ko mehkata bhot hai
yay sham e odasi yay beega sa mosam
mujko tanhayi ka ehsas dilata bhot hai
tasaver hina oska aysay mai akay
is baichain dil ko rulata bhot hai

Bahut accha likha hai chitra dear last five lines bahut hi accha laga padkar.
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2009, 02:46:06 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 12, 2009, 05:58:17 AM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI.....CHITRALSONY JI.......

YEH BAARISH KA MAUSAM MUJHE BHAATA BAHUT HAIN,
YEH SAWAN HAMEY YAAD AATA BAHUT HAIN,

YEH NADI KA PANI,JAHAN BEETI  JAWANI,
IS NADI KE KINARE, KOI BANI THI MERI DEWAANI.

BEEGI MEETI KI KHUSHBU,BEEGA KUDRAT KA NAZAARA,
DIL KO MERE KHUSH KAR JAATA BAHUT HAIN.

YRH BAARISH KA MAUSAM MUJHE BHAATA BAHUT HAIN,
YEH SAWAN HAMEY YAAD AATA BAHUT HAIN.

 Applause Applause Applause
Wonderful  Thumbs UP
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2009, 10:33:56 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai chitralsony ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2009, 10:36:10 PM »
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Bahut khoob Cara ji wonderful lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
excellent
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salil2002
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«Reply #10 on: August 14, 2009, 07:31:34 AM »
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bahut achche taiba sis and cara dear a wonderful reply

yeh baarish ka mausam kabhi kabhi aa kar
meri aankhon k raaste baras jaata hai
de jaata hai woh guzre pal yaar k saath k
jinhe yaad kar k yeh dil machal jaata hai
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«Reply #11 on: August 14, 2009, 07:33:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saahil ji,wonderful lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #12 on: August 14, 2009, 07:52:27 AM »
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Bahut hi pyaara likha hai chitra ji Applause Applause

Bahut accha jwaab Cara ji Applause Applause

Bahut khub saath diya aapne saahil ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 14, 2009, 07:56:44 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 14, 2009, 07:33:19 AM
Bahut khoob Saahil ji,wonderful lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle
Dear Madhu,aapki iss hansi ka raaz hamein bhi to btaaye
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2009, 04:24:12 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai Chitra bahot khoob....
Cara ji, Lil bro sahil bahoot khoob!!

Barsaat se pahle ki hawa, skoon dil ko de jaaye
barsaat ki sondhi sondhi se mehak, man pawan kar jaaye
bheege bheege fiza, ek nai dunia se najar ayye
dekh prakriti ka yah roop,man mera chiria ban urrta jaaye
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