chand-sitaroka kambal hatake...........jyuthika...........

by jyuthika on December 28, 2013, 06:58:13 PM
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Chand-sitaroka kambal hatake ratne subahko jaga diya,

thar-tharati thandse subahko rona aa gaya,

dard ye auns ke bund banke har jagah dikh gaya,

na dekh paya magar suraj subahke aansuoko,

aa gaya udhane sunhari kirnoki kashmiri shawl leke,

khil uthi fir subah hui naye dinki shuruaat zagmagahatse.........



♫♫ & ♫♫ jyuthika ♫♫ & ♫♫

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Aapne hamesha ki tarha bhut achha likha
mujhe Aap se bhut kuchh sikhna hai aise hi post karte rahana....


insaan ke jitna bus ki hota hai vo karta hai
fir bhi kuchh na mile to shayad khuda bhi uske liye rota hai
agar vo sahi ho to
khuda use vo ek din jaroor deta hai

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thanks thanks thanks to all of u ,

muje likhna achha lagta he so likhti hu,

mujse bhi bahetar kai he likhnevale...

me bhi sikhti hi hu likhna..
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