dharmo ko bante dekha,,,,jeet jainam

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yuh chaand se dil ko roshan karke dekha,
ro pada me chaand ko taaro me tanha dekha,

hum kiya bataye kisi ko apna haal e dil,
yaha har ek shaks mehfil me tanha dekha,

woqt ki bhaag  doud me picha karte karte,
aage bhadte logo ko apno se bichadte dekha,

woh bhi sadiya thi jaha baragasta khushi thi,
yaha chaand ki tarif se suraj ko jalte dekha,

khuda bhi nahi samjh paya apni banayi duniya,
usne banaya insaan,baad dharmo ko bante dekha,

aasmaan main mitti se banaya tha insaan rab ne,
[jeet] ne bhagwaan ko mitti ki morat bante dekha,


                        jj saini
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2014, 02:28:57 AM »
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yuh chaand se dil ko roshan karke dekha,
ro pada me chaand ko taaro me tanha dekha,

hum kiya bataye kisi ko apna haal e dil,
yaha har ek shaks mehfil me tanha dekha,

woqt ki bhaag  doud me picha karte karte,
aage bhadte logo ko apno se bichadte dekha,

woh bhi sadiya thi jaha baragasta khushi thi,
yaha chaand ki tarif se suraj ko jalte dekha,

khuda bhi nahi samjh paya apni banayi duniya,
usne banaya insaan,baad dharmo ko bante dekha,

aasmaan main mitti se banaya tha insaan rab ne,
[jeet] ne bhagwaan ko mitti ki morat bante dekha,


                        jj saini
Kya khoob likha hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Nice.
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