~~~ Garmi ~~~

by Tosha on June 02, 2005, 11:39:59 AM
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uff yeh garmi
yeh tak takati duph
mahenat ka paseena
kismat ke roop rekha
peela par gaya sara sama
panchiyo ne bhi aasman se moh mor liya
na dilke titliya
na gunje  madhoor sangeet
na dikhe hari ghas ka koi tinka
sukhta mausam
sukhi dharti
hai kya kare chaye garmi

uthe subha to
wo suraj ke paheli kiran
sheetal hawaye
madham ujalaye ko cheerti chaki aaye

wohi suraj ke kirne
jaan lene ko aati hai
subha shaam jo pyaas bujhaye
garmi ke doopahire main
bund bund ko tarsati hai
peele pare pedho ke patte
ab to aakhri bhi jadh raha hai
nahi koi shaow ke umeed
katra katra bhumi pathri hai

kahi koi kisan dikhta hai
majdoori aur sirf paseena
jalati garmi main laherate
khun se siche gaye wo khet nazar aate hai
taraste ho paani nahi
banjar gaun nazar aate hai
mahelo main baithe wo seth
gareeb ke ask peete nazar aate hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2005, 08:51:01 AM »
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very  nice  Tosha............................................ .........
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Tosha
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2006, 11:05:51 PM »
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Thanx waheed ... !!!
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sweety pie
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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2006, 10:59:23 PM »
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nice one Tosha!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2006, 12:53:05 AM »
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thanx Sweety :D
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Shikha12
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2006, 12:17:28 PM »
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Really cool....Tosha....in this Garmi....
Very nice.... =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>
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Tosha
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2006, 06:03:32 PM »
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Thanx Sikkha :d
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Tosha
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2007, 03:00:57 AM »
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:rolleyes:  :rolleyes:  :rolleyes:  :rolleyes:  :rolleyes: Sikkha
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2007, 11:53:02 AM »
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Ufff Tosha ji Bahut khoob likha hai aapne  =D> ... Uff Ye Garmi.  :lol:
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Tosha
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2007, 08:37:19 PM »
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how can anyone like this poem when it is full of mistakes and so hard to understand
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Tosha
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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2007, 08:50:41 PM »
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i have tried to make some corrections.

उफ़ ये गर्मी
ये टकटकाती धूप
महनत का पसीना
किस्मत की रूप रेखा
पीला पढ़ गया सारा समा
पंछियो ने भी आसमान से मुह मोड़ लिया
ना दिखे तितलिया
ना गूँजे माधूर संगीत
ना दिखे हरी घास का कोई तिनका
सूखता मौसम
सूखी धरती
है क्या करे छाए गर्मी

उठे सुभा तो
वो सूरज के पहेली किरण
शीतल हवाए
मधम उजायले को चियर के  
चकाचौंध रोशनी आए

वोही सूरज के किरने
जान लेने को आती है
सुभा शाम जो प्यास बुझाए
गर्मी के दूपहिरे मैं
बूँद बूँद को तरसती है
पीले पड़े पेढ़ो के पत्ते
अब तो आख़री पत्ता भी झड़ रहा है
नही कोई सावन के उमीड़
कतरा कतरा भूमि का फट गया है

कही कोई किसान दिखता है
मज़दूरी और सिर्फ़ पसीना
जलती गर्मी मे लहेराते
ख़ून से सीचे गाये वो खेत नज़र आते है
तरसते है पैर पानी नही
बंजर गाओं नज़र आते है
महेलो मैं बैठे वो सेठ
ग़रीब के अस्क पीते नज़र आते है

इस चिलमीलती गर्मी मे इस तकदीर मे
सिर्फ़ सूखा ही सूखा नज़र आता है






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uf yhe garmi
yhe taktkati dhup
mahnath ka paseena
kismat ki roop rekha
peela padh gaya sara sama
panchiyo ne bhi aasman se muh mod liya
na dikhe titliya
na gunje madhoor sangeet
na dikhe hari ghas ka koi tinka
sookhta mausam
sookhi dharti
hai kya kare chaye garmi

uthe subha to
wo suraj ke paheli kiran
sheetal hawaye
madhm ujayale ko cheer ke
chkachoundh roshni aaye

wohi suraj ke kirne
jaan lene ko aati hai
subha shaam jo pyaas bujhaye
garmi ke doopahire main
bund bund ko tarsati hai
peele pade pedho ke patte
ab to aakhri patta bhi jhd raha hai
nahi koi sawan ke umeed
katra katra bhumi ka phat gaya hai

kahi koi kisan dikhta hai
majdoori aur sirf paseena
jalati garmi me laherate
khun se siche gaye wo khet nazar aate hai
taraste hai par paani nahi
banjar gaon nazar aate hai
mahelo main baithe wo seth
gareeb ke ask peete nazar aate hai

is chilmilati garmi me is takdeer me
sirf sukha hi sukha nazar aata hai
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