GRISHM RITU KA CHITRAN ...............................PWFS

by pankajwfs on March 31, 2012, 09:25:30 AM
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GRISM RITU HAI UTHAN PE KHET KHALIYAN PE,
BAAG AUR GRAM PE CHAI VYAKULTA HAI KATHOR

PEDON KI SAKHAIN NIHAR RAHI GAGAN KI OAR,
TAP RAHI DHOOP ME GAON KI HAR KACHI DOR

PASU PACHIYON KA JHUND DUNDTA TANDI CHAON
JAL THAL YA NABH ME HO KAHIN KOI TO THOUR ?

SUKHE KE KAGAAR PAR HUE NADI SAROVAR BHI  
NA IN ME KOI DHAAR AAJ NA KOI HAI HILLOR.

DHOOL BHARE MARG PAR BHANWAR SI PAWAN CHALE
ANDHI KA ROOP LE GIRA RAHI HAI AAM BAOR

MANO KRUDH HUA SURYA JALA RAHA ANGAAR SE
VASUNDHRA KI PYAAS KO BADHA RAHA YE AOUR.

PRTIKSHARAT HAR JEEV ,VARSHA KI FUHAAR KO
AATE JAATE MEGH, JHUMA RAHE SABKA MANNMOR .

GRISM RITU HAI UTHAN PE KHET KHALIYAN PE,
BAAG AUR GRAM PE CHAI VYAKULTA HAI KATHOR


(PWFS - 31/03/2012)  
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2012, 09:42:56 AM »
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Pankaj ji Ye aapne NAVSAWANTSAR" ke aagman kaa badaa manohaaree chitran kiyaa hai aapko haardik badhaai
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2012, 12:28:13 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on March 31, 2012, 09:25:30 AM
GRISM RITU HAI UTHAN PE KHET KHALIYAN PE,
BAAG AUR GRAM PE CHAI VYAKULTA HAI KATHOR

PEDON KI SAKHAIN NIHAR RAHI GAGAN KI OAR,
TAP RAHI DHOOP ME GAON KI HAR KACHI DOR

PASU PACHIYON KA JHUND DUNDTA TANDI CHAON
JAL THAL YA NABH ME HO KAHIN KOI TO THOUR ?

SUKHE KE KAGAAR PAR HUE NADI SAROVAR BHI 
NA IN ME KOI DHAAR AAJ NA KOI HAI HILLOR.

DHOOL BHARE MARG PAR BHANWAR SI PAWAN CHALE
ANDHI KA ROOP LE GIRA RAHI HAI AAM BAOR

MANO KRUDH HUA SURYA JALA RAHA ANGAAR SE
VASUNDHRA KI PYAAS KO BADHA RAHA YE AOUR.

PRTIKSHARAT HAR JEEV ,VARSHA KI FUHAAR KO
AATE JAATE MEGH, JHUMA RAHE SABKA MANNMOR .

GRISM RITU HAI UTHAN PE KHET KHALIYAN PE,
BAAG AUR GRAM PE CHAI VYAKULTA HAI KATHOR


(PWFS - 31/03/2012)   
nice
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2012, 02:40:00 PM »
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bht achi vyakhya karii aapne grishm ritu ki--
acha laga
kuch hindi ki kavitayen iss tarah aati rahen to mann prasann ho jata hai
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khus rahen
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2012, 04:48:12 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 31, 2012, 09:42:56 AM
Pankaj ji Ye aapne NAVSAWANTSAR" ke aagman kaa badaa manohaaree chitran kiyaa hai aapko haardik badhaai
bahut bahut dhanyavad sir aapke protsahan aur margdarshan ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2012, 11:20:18 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob pankaj ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2012, 03:50:36 AM »
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wahhh ati sundar rachana pankajji
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2012, 08:52:43 AM »
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on March 31, 2012, 12:28:13 PM
nice
thanks masoom bhai
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2012, 05:18:34 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on March 31, 2012, 02:40:00 PM
bht achi vyakhya karii aapne grishm ritu ki--
acha laga
kuch hindi ki kavitayen iss tarah aati rahen to mann prasann ho jata hai
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thanks sarfira ji aap logon ka pyar milta rahega to aaeingi aisi kavitaien . Usual Smile
khus rahen
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2012, 07:51:37 AM »
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Quote from: dolly on April 01, 2012, 11:20:18 AM
bahut bahut khoob pankaj ji
Thanks Dolly ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 13, 2012, 03:21:45 AM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on April 02, 2012, 03:50:36 AM
wahhh ati sundar rachana pankajji
bahut bahut dhanyavaad Mann
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