ik diya maayus sa...........ufaq

by ufaq on June 26, 2012, 04:49:53 PM
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sardiyo men dhoop khilana sa lage.
tera ghar aana bada achchha lage.

zulmato ki had huyi  raaten meri,
ik diya maayus sa ladata lage.

aye hawaa dheere chalo is baag men,
phool ke paikar se ik kanta lage.

zard patte shaakh se girane lage,
mera daftar bhi mujhe uthata lage.

chal chale hum baadalo ke paar ab,
meri chhat se ye dhanak rastaa lage.

wo nahi milnaa to kuch bhi na mile,
baato se to tu ufaq bachcha lage.

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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2012, 07:38:35 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahutb bahut khoob likha hai aapne Ufaq ji....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2012, 12:27:45 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob dili daad qubool farmaaye
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2012, 09:17:03 AM »
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 bahut khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2012, 09:12:03 AM »
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Bahut khoob , ufaq ji .
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2012, 11:35:20 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2012, 11:49:07 AM »
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sardiyo men dhoop khilana sa lage.
tera ghar aana bada achchha lage.

zulmato ki had huyi  raaten meri,
ik diya maayus sa ladata lage.

aye hawaa dheere chalo is baag men,
phool ke paikar se ik kanta lage.

zard patte shaakh se girane lage,
mera daftar bhi mujhe uthata lage.

chal chale hum baadalo ke paar ab,
meri chhat se ye dhanak rastaa lage.

wo nahi milnaa to kuch bhi na mile,
baato se to tu ufaq bachcha lage.



guds Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2012, 04:13:48 PM »
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 read2 Applause Applause Applause :clap:Four star shayri.
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