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sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
hum nahi badle taarikh badalti rahi
khoyi hun jaane kaun si dunia hai
sab yahi rahe tasweer badalti rahi
sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2012, 01:24:52 AM » |
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very nice
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nandbahu
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2012, 01:59:09 AM » |
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bahut khoob vimmi ji
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #4 on: November 17, 2012, 04:24:54 AM » |
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sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
hum nahi badle taarikh badalti rahi
khoyi hun jaane kaun si dunia hai
sab yahi rahe tasweer badalti rahi
sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2012, 04:41:38 AM » |
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sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
hum nahi badle taarikh badalti rahi
khoyi hun jaane kaun si dunia hai
sab yahi rahe tasweer badalti rahi
sukhe patton ki shaakh jalti rahi
bohut khoob vimmi jee umda khayalat aur ehsasat piroye haiN aapne dheerroonn daaaad qubool karen |
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2012, 04:59:38 AM » |
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waah vimi ji bohut khub ek rau apka hua
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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2012, 07:37:00 AM » |
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Nice creation.
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«Reply #13 on: November 19, 2012, 06:32:24 AM » |
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bahut umda
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vimmi singh
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«Reply #14 on: November 19, 2012, 08:22:20 AM » |
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waah vimi ji bohut khub ek rau apka hua
bahut bahut shukriya saahill ji aapka.... aise hi saath dete rahen........  |
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on eTI community..
