koi pahile pahuch gaya baad mein aaya koi

by sunildehgawani on September 27, 2012, 05:08:26 PM
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BAAD CHHODNE KE DUNIYA INSAN KAHAN JATA HAI      
RAJ SADIYON SE MUDDATTON SE YEH KAHAN BATA PAYA KOI  
NASEEB MEIN JITNA LIKHA SABHI NE WAQT GUJARA UTNA
MEHMA CHAND ROZON KA HI FAQAT BAN KE AAYA KOI
FASLA DO MUSAFIRON KE BEECH MEIN ITNA SA RAHA
KOI PAHILE PAHUNCH GAYA BAAD MEIN AAYA KOI
DEKHTE DEKHTE HI PINZRE SE PANCHI NIKAL GAYA
ahsaas akhiri lamhon ka kahan bata paya koi  
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2012, 05:14:10 PM »
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zindgee ke bahut kareeb hai ye lines Sunil
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saccha ehsaas likha hai aapne is nazm me.n.

khair kaha.n the aap. sab khairiyat to hai na.
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2012, 05:24:09 PM »
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v nice.....
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2012, 05:25:33 PM »
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nazm par gaur farmane ke liye ,,mkv ji aapka tah-e dil sukriya ,,
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2012, 05:28:00 PM »
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on September 27, 2012, 05:24:09 PM
v nice.....
thnks gayatri ji ,,,hausla afjai ke liye ,,yun hi sath dete rahen
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2012, 05:38:59 PM »
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Sunil Jee Aadaab!


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Quote from: sunildehgawani on September 27, 2012, 05:08:26 PM
BAAD CHHODNE KE DUNIYA INSAN KAHAN JATA HAI     
RAJ SADIYON SE MUDDATTON SE YEH KAHAN BATA PAYA KOI 
NASEEB MEIN JITNA LIKHA SABHI NE WAQT GUJARA UTNA
MEHMA CHAND ROZON KA HI FAQAT BAN KE AAYA KOI
FASLA DO MUSAFIRON KE BEECH MEIN ITNA SA RAHA
KOI PAHILE PAHUNCH GAYA BAAD MEIN AAYA KOI
DEKHTE DEKHTE HI PINZRE SE PANCHI NIKAL GAYA
ahsaas akhiri lamhon ka kahan bata paya koi   
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«Reply #6 on: September 28, 2012, 12:30:25 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #7 on: September 28, 2012, 04:41:57 AM »
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bahut sunder sunil ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 28, 2012, 07:45:57 AM »
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terrific, likhte rahiye.........
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«Reply #9 on: September 28, 2012, 04:45:24 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 27, 2012, 05:38:59 PM
Sunil Jee Aadaab!


Wel Come back dear...

It's realy a amazing thought's
Just mindblowing... No words to pharese it's realy
touchy and deep thought's.... Usual Smile

My best wishes with you..
Keep posting.. Keep visiting...

Keep smiling...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
                   



parwaz ji aaj bahut dino ke baad apno ki mahfil mein laut aaya hoon,,bahut achha aur ek dum alag sa feel ho raha hai ,,waqt ka taqaza hi kuchh aisa hai ki kabhi kabhi fasle ho jate hain ,,aapne mera kalam padha aur saraha ,,iske liye dher sara pyar ,,,aapka adaab sar ankhon par ,,sath dete rahen ,,
 
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«Reply #10 on: September 28, 2012, 04:47:24 PM »
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tnks nand bahu ji
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«Reply #11 on: September 28, 2012, 04:49:36 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saini ji 
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«Reply #12 on: September 28, 2012, 04:50:47 PM »
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aqsh ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka
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«Reply #13 on: September 28, 2012, 04:54:47 PM »
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wah wah wah sunil ji bahut hi khoob creation Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: September 29, 2012, 03:38:19 PM »
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BHUT ACHI RACHAN HAI MUBARIK
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