Mere laut aane tak

by saaz_haldwanvi on May 08, 2009, 03:09:17 PM
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                  Mere laut aane tak
                  ye doobta suraj,
                  bahti mand-mand hawaein,
                  gahrati sham ke
                  gahrate ye sannate,
                  gharon ko laut te panchhiyon ki
                  sooni-sooni aawaje,
                  ghatiyon se takrakar aati
                  bhonkte kutto ki gunj,
                  laut te charwahon ki
                  ruk-ruk kar aati hoonk,
                  haan! aisi hi rahegi
                  kaal ke hathon shashvat
                  chhin kabhi naa sakegi,
                  main chhan bhangur
                  aaj ka kaam kal kar jaunga,
                  kintu hey shashvat!
                  tum dekhna, isi jagah milna
                  kyunki,
                  kal; main fir laut aaunga!
  
       " saaz haldwanvi"[from my book, kuchch kavitayein]
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2009, 03:30:53 PM »
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bhoot khoob Saaz ji!
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2009, 01:01:45 AM »
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very nice saaz ji.
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2009, 03:24:56 AM »
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Bohat Khoob....Saaz
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on May 08, 2009, 03:09:17 PM
                  Mere laut aane tak
                  ye doobta suraj,
                  bahti mand-mand hawaein,
                  gahrati sham ke
                  gahrate ye sannate,
                  gharon ko laut te panchhiyon ki
                  sooni-sooni aawaje,
                  ghatiyon se takrakar aati
                  bhonkte kutto ki gunj,
                  laut te charwahon ki
                  ruk-ruk kar aati hoonk,
                  haan! aisi hi rahegi
                  kaal ke hathon shashvat
                  chhin kabhi naa sakegi,
                  main chhan bhangur
                  aaj ka kaam kal kar jaunga,
                  kintu hey shashvat!
                  tum dekhna, isi jagah milna
                  kyunki,
                  kal; main fir laut aaunga!
  
       " saaz haldwanvi"[from my book, kuchch kavitayein]



VERII NAAICE....S.H
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2009, 06:14:20 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Saaz Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2009, 03:03:43 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Saaz Ji
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celmira,azeem,sajid,kw.madhuwesh and sophi aap sab logo ka tahe-dil se shukriya ada karta hun, dhanyawad
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GOOD COMPOSITION SAAZ JI Applause Applause
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Quote from: Sheba on July 23, 2009, 08:17:07 AM
GOOD COMPOSITION SAAZ JI Applause Applause
thanx sheeba
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