najare kudart (bharat ke najare)

by NETRAPAL on July 31, 2007, 12:52:37 PM
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kaha hai najare jis kahte hai swarg dhartee ka sab
wo wadiya hai kha jo kudrat ne mere dish me hai banayee

hai registaan yahee jhulast hai jo garmee se
ban jata hai chaman dhartee ka suhanee shyam se

kahi sardee hai pahado kee barfeelee havo  se
hai kahi ranginiya idhar foolo kee fijao se

jangal hai bade bade karte hai panchi bhee kalrav jaha
ajab ajab hai pashoo idhar panchee bhee chahchate hai yaha

ye gahane hai ye kudkart ke  mere desh ne jo  pahane hai
najare hai ye bharat ke ye wah ye lagate bade suhane hai

himalya hhai  adig khada dakshin me samandar hai
kahee mandir kee hai ghantee to kahi masjid me pukar hai

guunjte hai swar sooreele pahado kee fijao me
kahi hoate bhangde bhee maidanee hijao me

ye desh hai bahart kudra kat
ye kudrat ke najare hai........

netra....
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2007, 07:24:45 PM »
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Very nice effort.

Frankly, poem is little misleading in begining but later on it gets its flow. I had to read it many times to finally post response over here. But an effort never vain.
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