NANI..नानी

NANI


Haan.
Naani us din meine
Thujhe jalaya
Us din rakh tujhko
Chita(चिता ) pe keis naam kamaya
Us par tera paanv(पाँव ) jalaya

Us din
Jag(जग ) ne mera sath nibhaya
Sabne milke tujhko jalayan,
Nani meine thujko jalayan.

Nanihaal ko apne
Veeran nani meine banayan
Nani meine thjuko jalayaan
Nani meine tujhko jalayaan

Us pyaar bhari aawaaz ko meine
Jalayan
Dekh nani tujhko
Meine phholon mein dhalaya(फूँलों ढलाया )
Nani tera phool banaya
Nani meine tera phool banaya.

Nani..
Meine tera aarmaan jalaya.
Tera ek ek khawaab jalya..
Tera wo balidaan jalayan
Dil to kher har baar jalaya
Us din meine teri chita tak ko bhi
Jalayan…


Meine.
Apne upar khade
Us bhagvaan ko jalaya
Khuch to bol tu maa..
Us din meine teri maa ko jalaya
Tere pyaar bhare saansaar ko khoob rulaya,
us dine meine apane khuch bachoo ki us maa ko jalaya
ek parivaar ka meine aadhaar jalayan
us din meine ek parivaar ko bhare sansaar mein rulaya
meine tujkho ko nani kese jalayan.
Kese kaam ko meine us din kar aaya
Ye keisa mein kaam kar aaya.
Tera.
Nani tera naam jalayan
Us din esa baan chalayaan
Tujhko lita kar
Aarthi(अर्थी ) mein
Thujhko poora gaanv ghumaya
Nani
Meine thujhe mine chita pe litaya

Aaj.
Dikh rahe un
Haalto ko meine eisa khud
Banayaa
Nani
Thukho leke jati us bheed(भीड़ )
Ke saath chal kar meine
Unka sath nibhaya.
Farz ke naam pe meine thujkho jalyan
Ye kesa farz nibhayan
Jin kandhoon(कंधो ) ko thujse mili thi sikh
Nani
Thujkho unhi kandhoon(कंधो ) pe uthaya
Dekh nani ye kya kar mein thujhe uthaya
Nani thujko jag se uthaya
Nani meine thujhe
Kese meine thujhe jalyann.

Par
Nani ye sab karne mein
Meine phale khud ko bahut
Jalayan,
kitani roti raaton ko aajtak ye
samjhayan meine thujko nahin apne
abhimaan(अभिमान ) ko jalayaan,

naani meine bahut naam kamayaa
kagazoon ko meine is kalam se bahut
rangaya par tere meine naam jalyaan
sirf us din nahin
tere jeete jee bhi jalayan
nani tera naam doobayan(डूबाया ) meine
ek nahin har saal
doobayan.


Par
Ye to bata de nani meine
Thujko kya saaman dilaya
Tera hone ka meine Kaunsa
Daiytava(दाइतव ) nibhayaan
Sirf us din ter aarthi
Ko uthaya,
Us dine meine khud saath
Chal ke thujhko jayan.

Wo.
Waqt nani pehli baar tha aaya
Jab mein thujse milne waqt pe aaya
Ye jaan ke waqt nai tha
Tere paas phir bada samay pe aaya
Ye kesa samay mere zindagi mein
Us din Aayaa.

Apane
Aap ko meine waqt ka bada
Paband bataya
Warna to teri
Aawaaz sun ke kabhi na tere paas mein
Aayaan
Nani dekh kesa waqt tha aayaa
Meine thujse milne pehli baar waqt pe aayaa.

Us
Din aawaaz na thi tere paas
Us din mein waqt pe aaya
Teri aawaaz sunne ko pehli baar
Mera dil lalchaya(ललचाया )
Jab kaalcakra(कालचक्र ) tujh par bhaari
Pad aayaa..
Nani waqt ne chakra chalaya
Tujhe waqt ne apne pass bulaya
Mujko poori raat rulayaa
Ye waqt kaha se poora ho aayaa

Nani.
Kya tera meine naam Badaya
Lita thuhko to meine us din
Saar gaanv ghumaya

NANI TERA PAANV JALAYA
NANI TERA PAANV JALAYA
jis paanv se aashirwaad tha paaya
us din wo paanv jalaya
NANI TERA PAANV JALAYA
JALAYA

 

i feel really said...
it wasssss gr8 poetry
ravneet
your nani will proud on you...

 

wah wah

Purohit ji
U've tremendous potential. Bahut accha likha hai.
Par jyada lamba hai..& repetiotions of words too..
I hope u'll take it in right spirit.

this is my poem which i recites my college function &
that it is why this have repetation kynki jab poem recite ki jate khuch word repeat hote hai baar baar poem ke subject refrence mein aur ye actually mera nani ki death ke baa ka real manjar tha
actually i feel that then i wrote this in my poem that is why it's long hope u understand

regard with
mkv

 


adbhudat wah waah kya likha hai you made me cry....tremedous mind blowing.....

 

waaha purohit saab wahaa...