~ Nature, as a Paradise

by myheart_ursonly on March 06, 2005, 06:34:16 AM
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"Paradise"

I dream of a paradise every night and day,
where all my pains and sorrows walk away.
Beautiful red roses, smelling sweet,
colourful butterflies, dancing feet to feet.
I breathe in the freshness of healthy air,
and hear birds chirping, here and there.
Stream of river flowing down a place,
I cant explain in words, the beauty of such a nice place.
This is a place where everyone will feel right,
hearing orange flowers, singing in the music of sunlight.
Wrapped in the nature's warm embrace,
paradise of my dreams is the happiest place.

© Amit, 2005
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2005, 11:50:51 AM »
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"Paradise"

I dream of a paradise every night and day,
where all my pains and sorrows walk away.
Beautiful red roses, smelling sweet,
colourful butterflies, dancing feet to feet.
I breathe in the freshness of healthy air,
and hear birds chirping, here and there.
Stream of river flowing down a place,
I cant explain in words, the beauty of such a nice place.
This is a place where everyone will feel right,
hearing orange flowers, singing in the music of sunlight.
Wrapped in the nature's warm embrace,
paradise of my dreams is the happiest place.

© Amit, 2005
this is SO GOOD! kya likha hai bhai! keeptup too good!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #2 on: March 08, 2005, 02:25:39 PM »
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thanks sistaaaaaah! tongue3
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #3 on: March 09, 2005, 02:28:29 AM »
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NICE :D
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Tosha
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«Reply #4 on: March 09, 2005, 06:32:31 AM »
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i hopw waheeed...!!! things are fine with you...!
plz lets be here n maintain n manage things in a better way...
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i wish you te best now and forever in your life.
may the godd great GOD bless you.!:)

take care
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«Reply #5 on: March 09, 2005, 06:36:11 AM »
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TOSHA   tongue3
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dhadkan
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2005, 07:30:29 AM »
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i wish...  if i can really find such a place......... 2 gud Amit.....
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2005, 10:26:26 PM »
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okay dhadkan, thanks!
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Tosha
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2005, 07:19:52 AM »
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i hopw waheeed...!!! things are fine with you...!
plz lets be here n maintain n manage things in a better way...
...
i wish you te best now and forever in your life.
may the godd great GOD bless you.!:)

take care


 Shocked  Shocked
wt is this... :cry:
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 :lol:
ner mind
Amit....u r no doubt amazing!!!
grea8 partner
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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2005, 01:02:17 PM »
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LOVELY POEM , ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL  Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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