PAANEE ..... ZARRAA

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«Reply #15 on: November 24, 2013, 08:51:29 PM »
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waah waah zarra ji, khoobsurat ghazal dheron daad...
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«Reply #16 on: November 24, 2013, 10:54:49 PM »
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apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

zulf bheegee to ho gayee naagin
kya wo maaNge jise dasaa paanee

bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. bahut daad
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«Reply #17 on: November 25, 2013, 02:31:48 AM »
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dhul gaye daagh bujh gaye shole
khushk aaNkhoN se jab bahaa paanee

apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

waah waah zarra sahab lajawaab kalaam pesh kiiya hai
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Aap ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hooN Sahal ji ...
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«Reply #18 on: November 25, 2013, 04:35:50 PM »
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lajawaab peshkash.... paanee anmol hai kudrat me..
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«Reply #19 on: November 25, 2013, 04:49:22 PM »
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kab hai roke se bhi rukaa paanee
beh n paayaa hua hawaa paanee

band mut’thee se ris gayaa paanee
haath phailaa diye bharaa paanee

kitne bhookhoN ki hai ghizaa* paanee
kitne beemaaroN ki dawaa paanee

wo kaheiN kya lahoo hua paanee
kab bhalaa is qadar bahaa paanee

kashtiyaaN paar deeN kaaghaz ki
aur safeenoN* ko pee gayaa paanee

jab ye saazish banaa siyaasat ki
sharm se paanee paanee thaa paanee

koyee aab-e-hayaat ho so ho
nal se aataa mareez saa paanee

ik niwaalaa falak se utrega
n halak se utar rahaa paanee

khet sookhaa kaheeN pe ghar doobaa
hai ye insaaN ki hi khataa paanee

lazzat-o-lutf tishnaa-lab* se pooch
ye jo be-zauq* be-mazaa paanee

dhul gaye daagh bujh gaye shole
khushk aaNkhoN se jab bahaa paanee

apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

kab bujhee bhookh-pyaas hastee ki
khwaahisheiN haiN khuraak anaa* paanee

aaj saaghar meiN tu ne daalaa zahar
saaqiyaa aaj mat milaa paanee

zulf bheegee to ho gayee naagin
kya wo maaNge jise dasaa paanee

bijliyaaN baam* se giree jaateeN
gesuoN se baras rahaa paanee

qatraa* gum hai gumaan-e-gauhar* meiN
geele tan se n sookhtaa paanee

yaad aaye ba-waqt-e-haajat* hi
ek “zarraa” to doosraa paanee


- ZARRAA


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ghizaa = nutrition
safeenoN = ships
tishnaa-lab = a thirsty person
be-zauq = tasteless
anaa = ego
qatraa = drop of water
gumaan-e-gauhar = the misconception of being a pearl
baam = terrace
ba-waqt-e-haajat = at the time of need



Bas meri himmat toot gayee ....
Badi mushkil se padhe sab sher..
Har sher pe mar jaane ko jikiya ..  jio khoob jio
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«Reply #20 on: November 25, 2013, 11:07:06 PM »
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Waah zarra saheb , Paani par mukammal kitab likh di . Paani ki ahmiyat , istemaal , zaroorat , majboori , quality, muhawron mein paani ka istemaal , sab kuchh samo diya iseikkalaam mein .Bahut bahut mubarakbaad .

Hasan sahab ... aapne jis qadar inaayat bakshi is koshish ko us se bahaut hauslafzaayee huwee aur himmat mein izaafaa huwa ... yoon hi bazm ki rehnumaayee karte rahein ... shukriya aur dua ke saath ... zarraa
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«Reply #21 on: November 26, 2013, 12:52:15 AM »
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Behtareeeeeeeeeeen kalaaaaaaaaam... kaise tareef karoon zarra sahab... lafz nahin mil rahe.....Hazaron hazaron daad qubool kare.. Rau kal doongi insha Allah...

Aqsh ji ... aap ki inaayat ki aap ne is koshish ko tawajjoh di aur hauslafzaayee kari. Bahaut bahaut shukriya aap ka ...
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«Reply #22 on: November 26, 2013, 01:11:14 AM »
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waah zarra ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: November 26, 2013, 01:56:42 AM »
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Shukriya Nashwani ji !
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«Reply #24 on: November 26, 2013, 02:07:50 AM »
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kab hai roke se bhi rukaa paanee
beh n paayaa hua hawaa paanee

band mut’thee se ris gayaa paanee
haath phailaa diye bharaa paanee
Applause Applause Applause Applause

kitne bhookhoN ki hai ghizaa* paanee
kitne beemaaroN ki dawaa paanee

wo kaheiN kya lahoo hua paanee
kab bhalaa is qadar bahaa paanee

kashtiyaaN paar deeN kaaghaz ki
aur safeenoN* ko pee gayaa paanee
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

jab ye saazish banaa siyaasat ki
sharm se paanee paanee thaa paanee
Applause Applause Applause :clap:baot alaa janaab


koyee aab-e-hayaat ho so ho
nal se aataa mareez saa paanee
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ik niwaalaa falak se utrega
n halak se utar rahaa paanee

khet sookhaa kaheeN pe ghar doobaa
hai ye insaaN ki hi khataa paanee
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

lazzat-o-lutf tishnaa-lab* se pooch
ye jo be-zauq* be-mazaa paanee
  kya baat kahi hai janaab Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

dhul gaye daagh bujh gaye shole
khushk aaNkhoN se jab bahaa paanee
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apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

kab bujhee bhookh-pyaas hastee ki
khwaahisheiN haiN khuraak anaa* paanee

aaj saaghar meiN tu ne daalaa zahar
saaqiyaa aaj mat milaa paanee Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

zulf bheegee to ho gayee naagin
kya wo maaNge jise dasaa paanee

bijliyaaN baam* se giree jaateeN
gesuoN se baras rahaa paanee

qatraa* gum hai gumaan-e-gauhar* meiN
geele tan se n sookhtaa paanee
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

yaad aaye ba-waqt-e-haajat* hi
ek “zarraa” to doosraa paanee
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hardjanaab bahot khoob


- ZARRAA


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ghizaa = nutrition
safeenoN = ships
tishnaa-lab = a thirsty person
be-zauq = tasteless
anaa = ego
qatraa = drop of water
gumaan-e-gauhar = the misconception of being a pearl
baam = terrace
ba-waqt-e-haajat = at the time of need





mashaallah mashaaallah mashaallah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaah aur waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janaab. itna alaa itna khoobsoorat. mushaire mein padne wali ghazal. ye to zarra sahab yoindia mein likhi gai behrteen ghazal mein se ek hui.kitni taarif karoon samjh nahin aa raha. maa'zrat ke saath rau ka quota aaj ka khtam hua . aainda jab bhi aana hoga de deoon gaa.



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«Reply #25 on: November 26, 2013, 02:17:41 AM »
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Mohtaram, kya taraasha hai paani ko aapne, samaa baaNdh diya, mehfil loot li, behad umda aur aala darje ke ghazal Zarra saheb, dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kareN. Ye ash'aar khaas pasand aaye:

kitne bhookhoN ki hai ghizaa* paanee
kitne beemaaroN ki dawaa paanee

wo kaheiN kya lahoo hua paanee
kab bhalaa is qadar bahaa paanee

jab ye saazish banaa siyaasat ki
sharm se paanee paanee thaa paanee

koyee aab-e-hayaat ho so ho
nal se aataa mareez saa paanee

khet sookhaa kaheeN pe ghar doobaa
hai ye insaaN ki hi khataa paanee

lazzat-o-lutf tishnaa-lab* se pooch
ye jo be-zauq* be-mazaa paanee

yaad aaye ba-waqt-e-haajat* hi
ek “zarraa” to doosraa paanee



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«Reply #26 on: November 26, 2013, 03:22:02 PM »
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dhul gaye daagh bujh gaye shole
khushk aaNkhoN se jab bahaa paanee

apne andar ki tum fizaa badlo
bas badalte rahe hawaa-paanee

zulf bheegee to ho gayee naagin
kya wo maaNge jise dasaa paanee

Wah Kya Kehne Bahut Khub Sahab
Yeh Ashaar Mujhe Bahut Pasand Aaye
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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab


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Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Shihab sahab !!
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«Reply #27 on: November 27, 2013, 02:06:25 AM »
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just awesome incredible qalaam............speechless

Thank you very much for your kind words friend !!!
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«Reply #28 on: November 27, 2013, 03:05:37 AM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!!! kya paanee pilaayaa hai aap ne

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«Reply #29 on: November 27, 2013, 12:57:17 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. bahut daad

Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Suman ji ...
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