Peepal key pattoun ney gaaye jo geet!

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Peepal key pattoun ney gaaye jo geet,
Waayu key halkey-barhey jhounkon mein jhoom kar:
Mujhey bahut bhaaye hain!

Mein ney bhi,
Waisey hee geet,
Madhur Milan beylaa mein,
Tumko sunaaye hain!!

Tumney unhain chaahaa hai-
Jee bhar saraahaa hai-
Meyree prashansa kee hai-
Mujhey, bahut sahrudaya batlaayaa hai!

Kintu aaj,
Yah bhi sun lo tum (Jo sach hai: sundar bhi hai):
Meyree anubhooti,
Unheen pattoun par ankit,
Jhounkon key sahrudaya sparsh ki anukruti hai!

Ye geet meyrey naheen:
Meyrey duhraaye hain!!
     
      -   Ram Prakash Garg ‘Ramwatiya’
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2009, 09:05:24 AM »
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Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya,.

Nice Sharing,.
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2009, 09:16:29 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 04, 2009, 09:05:24 AM
Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya,.

Nice Sharing,.

Thanks you liked my Hindi poem! I write in Hindi by the pen-name 'Ramwatiya' & in English by the pen-name of 'G.R.Prakash'!
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2009, 09:19:31 AM »
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Bahoth qoob abd sahab ajj paheli baar apki thread pe khuch likhne ki gustaqi kar raha hon !!

Mahefilon me meri ghazalon per log haste rahe "Qadeer"
Viraniyon me gunguna-a- to pather bhi ro pade !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2009, 09:20:08 AM »
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Sorry, Mujhe Maloom Nahi Tha, Ke Aap Languages ke Saath Naam Badalte Ho,.

Ye Andaaz Bhi Pasand Aaya Aapka,.
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Bahoot hi acha likha hai apne abd ji Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 04, 2009, 09:19:31 AM
Bahoth qoob abd sahab ajj paheli baar apki thread pe khuch likhne ki gustaqi kar raha hon !!

Mahefilon me meri ghazalon per log haste rahe "Qadeer"
Viraniyon me gunguna-a- to pather bhi ro pade !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Waah Bhai, Kya Khoob Ashaar POst Kiye Hain,.

Bohat Bohat Achche Hain, Yunhi Hume Aapke Fun Ka Lutf Uthaane Do,;.
May Allah Bless You Bhai,.
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2009, 10:36:31 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 04, 2009, 09:19:31 AM
Bahoth qoob abd sahab ajj paheli baar apki thread pe khuch likhne ki gustaqi kar raha hon !!

Mahefilon me meri ghazalon per log haste rahe "Qadeer"
Viraniyon me gunguna-a- to pather bhi ro pade !!

Qadeer Toopchi
Bahut khoob Toopchi ji!

Mein jo royi raat bhar,
Barsey gouhar khoob!
Meyraa piyaa,  na, khojtaa
Unko, jaaye doob?

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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2009, 10:47:53 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 04, 2009, 09:20:08 AM
Sorry, Mujhe Maloom Nahi Tha, Ke Aap Languages ke Saath Naam Badalte Ho,.
Ye Andaaz Bhi Pasand Aaya Aapka,.
Bhai, meyraa ziyaadahtar kalaam Hindi / English mein hi hai! Urdu mein, mein likhtaa (Devnagri lipi mein) to kafee arsey sey rahaa hoon, par 2004 A.D. sey Arbi/Farasi script mein bhi likh rahaa hoon!
Shukriyah!
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Quote from: salma786 on February 04, 2009, 09:42:37 AM
Bahoot hi acha likha hai apne abd ji Clapping Smiley
Bahut-bahut shukriyah salma786 ji!
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2009, 11:43:42 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 04, 2009, 08:55:46 AM
Peepal key pattoun ney gaaye jo geet,
Waayu key halkey-barhey jhounkon mein jhoom kar:
Mujhey bahut bhaaye hain!

Mein ney bhi,
Waisey hee geet,
Madhur Milan beylaa mein,
Tumko sunaaye hain!!

Tumney unhain chaahaa hai-
Jee bhar saraahaa hai-
Meyree prashansa kee hai-
Mujhey, bahut sahrudaya batlaayaa hai!

Kintu aaj,
Yah bhi sun lo tum (Jo sach hai: sundar bhi hai):
Meyree anubhooti,
Unheen pattoun par ankit,
Jhounkon key sahrudaya sparsh ki anukruti hai!

Ye geet meyrey naheen:
Meyrey duhraaye hain!!
     
      -   Ram Prakash Garg ‘Ramwatiya’


Beautiful verses Abd !!
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Quote from: Celmira on February 04, 2009, 11:43:42 AM
Beautiful verses Abd !!
Thanks Dr. Talat!
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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2009, 04:42:29 PM »
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very nice... par such ye hai, kya muhje bahot kum itnee mushkil hindi samhaj aatee hai...  icon_scratch
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2009, 05:06:35 PM »
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Bahut khoob ABD Ji Applause
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on February 04, 2009, 04:42:29 PM
very nice... par such ye hai, kya muhje bahot kum itnee mushkil hindi samhaj aatee hai...  icon_scratch
Thanks! anjaan dharkan ji, this is simple literary Hindi, and with very little effort almost all Urdu-knowing people are quite likely to understand it. This I've posted for a change!

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