Raat Ye Albeli.....Koyal

by KOYAL46 on December 25, 2010, 01:12:08 PM

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Raat Ye Albeli.....

Raat aayee hai andheri
Sardi aur ye ghanaa kohra

Dadaji ki khansi deti ab pehra
Kaun aayaa sujhe na koi chehra

Samay bhee aaj lagta hai thehra
Aa na jaaye laaj ka koi lutera

Sakuchayi si baithee hu akeli
Khud he khud se puchhti hu paheli

Kaash ayse mai saath hoti meri saheli
Tou pareshaan na karti raat ye albeli


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Re: Raat Ye Albeli.....Koyal

«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2010, 02:06:56 PM »

oyeee hoyeeeee ki gal he kudiye.....

tussi to aajkal vadi cute cute poetry likhne lagi ho....

o ji dil khush hua ji badhaiya ji badhaiya......


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KOYAL46

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Re: Raat Ye Albeli.....Koyal

«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2010, 02:16:46 PM »

Tussi panjaabi kab se bolne lag gaye ho ji.....
Vadhiya hai ji....meri kavita aapnu changi lagi....
Do line tussi bhi likh dete naa....tab tou koi gal hoti....
Thanku hai ji


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nirala

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Re: Raat Ye Albeli.....Koyal

«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2010, 03:07:18 PM »

aapki raat bahut albeli hai ji
sadda bhi changa lagda ..
""albeli atkheli raat
sakuchai simti si bethi
dil me chupaye koi baat
kya baat ji kya baat""
thanx


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Raat Ye Albeli.....Koyal

«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2010, 06:50:40 PM »

Albeli raat ka kafi daraavni scene create kiya hai aapne.....aapki albeli raat itni khaufnaak hai to khaufnaak raat kaisi hogi hahahahaha.


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Re: Raat Ye Albeli.....Koyal

«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2010, 07:57:25 AM »

main sajid ji ki baat se sehmat hun...
guddo jab suhani albeli raat aisi hai to ghani kaali andheri darawani raat kaisi hogi...

lekin bht badhiya koshish hai chhoti...bht achchi agi padhkar aur jo scene tumne create kiya wo bhi bht mast hai....keep writing swty...love u mmuuaahhh