Rail Gari

by khalidrawat on July 25, 2007, 08:11:43 AM
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Chuka chuk chuka chuk chal rail gari
He manzil ki janib barhi rail gari

He aaraam ko jaise sofa banaya
Safar ke liye he bani rail gari

Mere dil ke patri per aa ker kabhi bhi
Ruki naa tere roop ki rail gari

Chale aao jaldi ke najaane kab se
Tumhare liye he khari rail gari

Kare paar lehzoon main sehra-o-darya
Ajab tez row he naye rail gari
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2007, 10:30:01 AM »
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Rail gadi..

That is good !
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2008, 08:43:30 PM »
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your chuka chuk chuka chuk is very nice. Last line samajh mein nahin aayi per kavita bahut ajeez hai.
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«Reply #3 on: March 09, 2008, 02:29:17 AM »
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Quote from: khalidrawat on July 25, 2007, 08:11:43 AM
Chuka chuk chuka chuk chal rail gari
He manzil ki janib barhi rail gari

He aaraam ko jaise sofa banaya
Safar ke liye he bani rail gari

Mere dil ke patri per aa ker kabhi bhi
Ruki naa tere roop ki rail gari

Chale aao jaldi ke najaane kab se
Tumhare liye he khari rail gari

Kare paar lehzoon main sehra-o-darya
Ajab tez row he naye rail gari

Bohot hi khoob Khalid Rawat ji Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2008, 02:29:07 PM »
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Nice One Khalid Ji,. Applause
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