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rodra roop(CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on July 01, 2013, 01:12:33 AM

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rodra roop jo kudrat ne liya hai
jarur hamne koi gunaah kiya hai

rota hu dekh ke un maasumo ko mei
kudrat ne jinhe sabse juda kiya hai

dil mei ek dard , aankh mei bus khoff
bachne walo ko tohfa kudrat ne diya hai

marne walo mei kya the sab adharmi
sawaal khuda se aaj hamne yahi kiya hai

aa jaate hai aansu karte hi baat unsab ke
tabahi ke lamho ko jisne waha jiya hai

na khelo kudrat se ab aur na samjho
paigaam khuda ne hame ye diya haI

Aaya jo bhi bach ke manoj us aapda se
pai hai nai zindgi bus yehi baya kiya hai


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ParwaaZ

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Re: rodra roop(CSET)

«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2013, 01:39:43 AM »

Manoj jee Aadaab!

Janab aapki kalaam ke bhaav aap kee shabd rachna baqubi bayaaN kar gayi ...

Aur aapka matla hi sabke sawaaloN ka aik lauta jawab hai.....
Vastavikta par likhna vastavik meiN bahut kathin hai ... par aapne baqubi likha hai...

Is khoob rachna par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye ... aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ...


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: rodra roop(CSET)

«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2013, 02:00:58 AM »

Bahut Khoobsuart Peshqash Hai.


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MANOJ6568

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Re: rodra roop(CSET)

«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2013, 02:28:26 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 01, 2013, 01:39:43 AM

AADAAB
SHABD NAHI HAI MERE PASS AAPKA SHUKRIYA ADA KARNA KA. BAHUT DUKHI AUR DARD MEI DUB KER LIKHI HAI.JO AAPDA MEI MAARE GAYE HAI,UNKO EK CHOTI SI SHARDHANJALIU DENE KI KAUSIS BHER KI HAI.
BUS YU HI HAUSLA DETE RAHIYE

Khuda Hafez ...


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Re: rodra roop(CSET)

«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2013, 02:32:48 AM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 01, 2013, 02:00:58 AM

Bahut Khoobsuart Peshqash Hai.

THX


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Re: rodra roop(CSET)

«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2013, 02:51:21 AM »

Quote from: MANOJ6568 on July 01, 2013, 02:32:48 AM

THX

Ur Welcome.


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Re: rodra roop(CSET)

«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2013, 11:48:15 AM »

bahut sunder


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Re: rodra roop(CSET)

«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2013, 02:01:50 PM »

Manoj bhai - bahot acha ehsaas raha - tareef ke liye mere paas alfaaz nahi hain - aur yahan to waah bhi nahi kaha jayega ke dil padh kar rota hai - bas upar wale se dua hai ke wo sab ko sidhi raah dikhaye jis par chal kar ham sab mahfooz rahen aameen...