.......SAAWAN AAYA.......

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«Reply #45 on: January 05, 2006, 06:14:07 AM »
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Wowwwwwwwwww sub ne buaht acha likha hai yehan to kya baat hai!!
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«Reply #46 on: January 05, 2006, 06:00:12 PM »
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Quote from: "Saba_Saba"
Waheed

Na keh mujh se aisee dua mere dost
ke zindagi bas teri yaado.n me guzar jaane de



wonderful   Saba.............too good Reply  Harsh  Bhai..........Thanxxx Neha.......

Meri  Yeh Dua Hai Ki Mera  Janaza Tumhar Ghar Se Hokar Guzre,
Kafan De  Lipta  Rahoon Lekin Tumhare Aanchal   Ko  Tarsoo
Baad  Dafnane pPer  Mujhse  Mera Khuda  Poocha
Main Kahoon  Khuda Se  Ki  Meri   Rooh Humesha Teri  Bahoon Mein  Nikle...
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«Reply #47 on: January 06, 2006, 05:04:51 AM »
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Waheed ji..bahoot kamaal ka thought liya hai aapne...meri apni puraani Gazal mujhe yaad aayeeee....lekin is ashar ke saath be-insaafi nahi honi chaiye....agar aap izaazat dein toh is ashar ko main kutchh is taraanh pesh kerna chaoonga....agar achha lage toh aap ise yuin hi apni taraf se hi samjhein..nahi toh hukam kariyega...delete ker denge....

Waheed sahib ki kalam se.....

Dua hai ki janaza mera, tere Ghar se Hoker Guzre,
Lipta rahoon Kafan se, Magar tere Anchal ko tarasta Guzre.
Baad Dafnaane ke gar, Khuda Mujhse Poochhe, toh yahi kahoon.
Rooh Gar Guzre , Bas teri bahon se hoker Guzre.
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«Reply #48 on: January 06, 2006, 12:46:38 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwww

Kamaal ..... Waheed aur Harash Ji .... Dam hai shair me ..... tongue3

ab mai kya bolu .... sab to aap ne bol diya sad5

Woh kehte hai hum se wafa tum se hai
Jaan se guzar jaaye itni wafa tum se hai
Zara puchhe koi humari taraf se
Ke hum ne kaha kab wafa tum se hai
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«Reply #49 on: January 06, 2006, 12:59:48 PM »
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Thanxxxxxxxx Neha ...... :oops:

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Bohat KhuuB Harash Ji

Meri soch kuchh is tarah hai

Uljhe kyu hum dosti aur dushmani me
Milte hai bicharte hai log zindagi me

Jo muskura ke mile unhe gale laga liya
Jo hua shikwa to dar guzar bhi kar diya
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aisi soch se shaks satlok mko hi yaad ker sakta hai...aajkal aisi soch ke dildaar kahaan....agar hain toh is zamee asmaan main kahaan...

Apno ka dard chahte hue jahaan-jahaan gaye,
Na poochhiye ki kya-kya hua ki hum kahaan-kahaan gaye.

Hamaare dil main dard hai, seene main ek aag hai,
Talashte rahe ik sakoon ai dost hum jahaan jahaan gaye.


Sukun milta kaha hai dhoondne se ~Harash~
Ke yeh basta hai bas apne hi mann me
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«Reply #50 on: January 06, 2006, 04:33:52 PM »
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Waheed ji..bahoot kamaal ka thought liya hai aapne...meri apni puraani Gazal mujhe yaad aayeeee....lekin is ashar ke saath be-insaafi nahi honi chaiye....agar aap izaazat dein toh is ashar ko main kutchh is taraanh pesh kerna chaoonga....agar achha lage toh aap ise yuin hi apni taraf se hi samjhein..nahi toh hukam kariyega...delete ker denge....

Waheed sahib ki kalam se.....

Dua hai ki janaza mera, tere Ghar se Hoker Guzre,
Lipta rahoon Kafan se, Magar tere Anchal ko tarasta Guzre.
Baad Dafnaane ke gar, Khuda Mujhse Poochhe, toh yahi kahoon.
Rooh Gar Guzre , Bas teri bahon se hoker Guzre.


wow thanxxxxxx  alot  Harsh  bhai....... aap  ne  bahot  acchas  bana diya.....  bahot accha laga  mujhe....
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«Reply #51 on: January 06, 2006, 05:09:40 PM »
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Thanxxxxxxxx Neha ...... :oops:

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Bohat KhuuB Harash Ji

Meri soch kuchh is tarah hai

Uljhe kyu hum dosti aur dushmani me
Milte hai bicharte hai log zindagi me

Jo muskura ke mile unhe gale laga liya
Jo hua shikwa to dar guzar bhi kar diya
Usual Smile
aisi soch se shaks satlok mko hi yaad ker sakta hai...aajkal aisi soch ke dildaar kahaan....agar hain toh is zamee asmaan main kahaan...

Apno ka dard chahte hue jahaan-jahaan gaye,
Na poochhiye ki kya-kya hua ki hum kahaan-kahaan gaye.

Hamaare dil main dard hai, seene main ek aag hai,
Talashte rahe ik sakoon ai dost hum jahaan jahaan gaye.


Sukun milta kaha hai dhoondne se ~Harash~
Ke yeh basta hai bas apne hi mann me


Thanxxxx  Saba.........  wonderful  reply.. Saba....Harsh Bhai.....  bahot  deep  tum  likhti  ho..

Sukoon  mil  jaayega  agar  mehboob ki  bahein  ho  "Saba"
ab  is  bhari  duniya mein  koi  aisa  shaks nahi milta.....
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«Reply #52 on: January 07, 2006, 05:46:56 AM »
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Saba ji...waah...kya khoob kahaa...ab ye neha kon hai....Huh? Usual Smile tumhaari our hamaari soch main bas yahi farak hai....sakoo.n agar mann main hota toh mann yuin hi na batakta...ye yaadein hain jo idhar udhar bhaagti hain...our sukh chain ka utaar chadaav badlata rehta hai....saba ji sukoo.n na milne ke der se hum doondna nahi na chhod sakte...sukoo.n toh bas love our payaar main hi basta hai na....chae woh sahil ka ho, ma-abbu ka ho ya bhai-behen ka ho...jara apne ander jhaank ker dekho kiska hai...

Ibtada hai pyaar ki palbhar palat ke dekh,
Annkhe jawaa.n hai aapki apni nazer se dekh.

Is dil ke gulistaa.n main, khilo bhi phool ban-ker,
dil ki udaas basti main, palbhar thheher ke dekh.

Dil main teri yaadein, baithhi hain ghar banaye,
seene ki meri dadkan, dil se sun ke dekh.

Tera bana hoo.n saya gair nahin hoo.n 'harsh',
Khwaab-gaah main mere, kadam toh rakh ke dekh.



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Thanxxxxxxxx Neha ...... :oops:

Quote from: "harashmahajan"
Quote from: "Saba_Saba"
Bohat KhuuB Harash Ji

Meri soch kuchh is tarah hai

Uljhe kyu hum dosti aur dushmani me
Milte hai bicharte hai log zindagi me

Jo muskura ke mile unhe gale laga liya
Jo hua shikwa to dar guzar bhi kar diya
Usual Smile
aisi soch se shaks satlok mko hi yaad ker sakta hai...aajkal aisi soch ke dildaar kahaan....agar hain toh is zamee asmaan main kahaan...

Apno ka dard chahte hue jahaan-jahaan gaye,
Na poochhiye ki kya-kya hua ki hum kahaan-kahaan gaye.

Hamaare dil main dard hai, seene main ek aag hai,
Talashte rahe ik sakoon ai dost hum jahaan jahaan gaye.


Sukun milta kaha hai dhoondne se ~Harash~
Ke yeh basta hai bas apne hi mann me
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«Reply #53 on: January 07, 2006, 05:54:21 AM »
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Shukriya waheed ji aapko pasand aya.....God bless you always...

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Waheed ji..bahoot kamaal ka thought liya hai aapne...meri apni puraani Gazal mujhe yaad aayeeee....lekin is ashar ke saath be-insaafi nahi honi chaiye....agar aap izaazat dein toh is ashar ko main kutchh is taraanh pesh kerna chaoonga....agar achha lage toh aap ise yuin hi apni taraf se hi samjhein..nahi toh hukam kariyega...delete ker denge....

Waheed sahib ki kalam se.....

Dua hai ki janaza mera, tere Ghar se Hoker Guzre,
Lipta rahoon Kafan se, Magar tere Anchal ko tarasta Guzre.
Baad Dafnaane ke gar, Khuda Mujhse Poochhe, toh yahi kahoon.
Rooh Gar Guzre , Bas teri bahon se hoker Guzre.


wow thanxxxxxx  alot  Harsh  bhai....... aap  ne  bahot  acchas  bana diya.....  bahot accha laga  mujhe....
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«Reply #54 on: January 09, 2006, 07:49:49 PM »
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Neha hai Princess21... mai unhe thanx keh rahi thi na ... tongue3

Waheed ...... thanxxxxxx ..... Moto bohat achhi lines likhi hai .... Usual Smile

Harash ji

aap ke aur mere khayal mil kar bhi nahi milte....

Kabhi veeran rasto par
koi anjaan si dastak
agar tum ko sunayi de
sada ki shakal me aakar kahe
mohabbat naam hai mera
palat kar dekhna mat tum
ke is kaar e mohabbat me
azeeyat hi azeeyat hai
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«Reply #55 on: January 10, 2006, 06:59:03 AM »
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haan theek kehti ho saba..kahaan bekaar ke shayaro main aa gayee na aap :D .....haan khayaal hamare mil ker bhi nahi milte...ye aapki soch hai....hum toh samjhe the ki aapki soch bulandiyaan chhoo rahi hai sad5 ...anyways...

Khijaan ayee jo kismat main,baharon ka bhi dum nikle,
Jahaan doonde hum arma ko wahaan arma hi kam nikle.

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Neha hai Princess21... mai unhe thanx keh rahi thi na ... tongue3

Waheed ...... thanxxxxxx ..... Moto bohat achhi lines likhi hai .... Usual Smile

Harash ji

aap ke aur mere khayal mil kar bhi nahi milte....

Kabhi veeran rasto par
koi anjaan si dastak
agar tum ko sunayi de
sada ki shakal me aakar kahe
mohabbat naam hai mera
palat kar dekhna mat tum
ke is kaar e mohabbat me
azeeyat hi azeeyat hai
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«Reply #56 on: January 11, 2006, 08:07:55 PM »
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yeh kya harash ji ..... aap ne bhi mood change kar diya....
aaiye aap ki mualaqat natkhat Saba se karwate hai ....tongue3


Yu armano par na tum sitam dhaao Harash
Ke niklenge dil se to aasma kam hai
Abhi ek hi thi baat teri aur meri
jo chal nikli to saara sama kam hai

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haan theek kehti ho saba..kahaan bekaar ke shayaro main aa gayee na aap :D .....haan khayaal hamare mil ker bhi nahi milte...ye aapki soch hai....hum toh samjhe the ki aapki soch bulandiyaan chhoo rahi hai sad5 ...anyways...

Khijaan ayee jo kismat main,baharon ka bhi dum nikle,
Jahaan doonde hum arma ko wahaan arma hi kam nikle.

Quote from: "Saba_Saba"
Neha hai Princess21... mai unhe thanx keh rahi thi na ... tongue3

Waheed ...... thanxxxxxx ..... Moto bohat achhi lines likhi hai .... Usual Smile

Harash ji

aap ke aur mere khayal mil kar bhi nahi milte....

Kabhi veeran rasto par
koi anjaan si dastak
agar tum ko sunayi de
sada ki shakal me aakar kahe
mohabbat naam hai mera
palat kar dekhna mat tum
ke is kaar e mohabbat me
azeeyat hi azeeyat hai
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«Reply #57 on: January 12, 2006, 05:47:57 AM »
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Waah saba ji waah...lagta hai nasha sa chhane laga....mood ki baat nahi hai saba ji....mood toh shayar ki shayari dekh ker banta our sanwarta hai....hamne toh shayari main hi nikaah our shayari main talaak hote dekha hai....kutchh is kader milte hain log..ki jinse shayari per bhi sitam hote dekha hai......


Tum mile toh zindagi main ik Nasha sa chhane laga,
Bemaza si ho gayee thi, lagta hai ab maza aane laga.

Log kehte the jise kamsin our kabhi mayoos si,
Ab uska her andaaz mere jakham sehlaane laga.

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yeh kya harash ji ..... aap ne bhi mood change kar diya....
aaiye aap ki mualaqat natkhat Saba se karwate hai ....tongue3


Yu armano par na tum sitam dhaao Harash
Ke niklenge dil se to aasma kam hai
Abhi ek hi thi baat teri aur meri
jo chal nikli to saara sama kam hai

Quote from: "harashmahajan"
haan theek kehti ho saba..kahaan bekaar ke shayaro main aa gayee na aap :D .....haan khayaal hamare mil ker bhi nahi milte...ye aapki soch hai....hum toh samjhe the ki aapki soch bulandiyaan chhoo rahi hai sad5 ...anyways...

Khijaan ayee jo kismat main,baharon ka bhi dum nikle,
Jahaan doonde hum arma ko wahaan arma hi kam nikle.

Quote from: "Saba_Saba"
Neha hai Princess21... mai unhe thanx keh rahi thi na ... tongue3

Waheed ...... thanxxxxxx ..... Moto bohat achhi lines likhi hai .... Usual Smile

Harash ji

aap ke aur mere khayal mil kar bhi nahi milte....

Kabhi veeran rasto par
koi anjaan si dastak
agar tum ko sunayi de
sada ki shakal me aakar kahe
mohabbat naam hai mera
palat kar dekhna mat tum
ke is kaar e mohabbat me
azeeyat hi azeeyat hai
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«Reply #58 on: January 15, 2006, 08:16:02 PM »
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lollzzzzzz nashe me hai ........ hume to surur aata hi nahi .... waise yeh surur hota kya hai tongue3

Na jagao is neend se ke abhi nashe me hu
Mujhko yaaro.n na behlao ke mai nashe me hu
Nahi mujh ko nasha kisi gulabi sharab ka
Yeh meh khawari us ki deed ki hai ke mai nashe me hu

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Waah saba ji waah...lagta hai nasha sa chhane laga....mood ki baat nahi hai saba ji....mood toh shayar ki shayari dekh ker banta our sanwarta hai....hamne toh shayari main hi nikaah our shayari main talaak hote dekha hai....kutchh is kader milte hain log..ki jinse shayari per bhi sitam hote dekha hai......


Tum mile toh zindagi main ik Nasha sa chhane laga,
Bemaza si ho gayee thi, lagta hai ab maza aane laga.

Log kehte the jise kamsin our kabhi mayoos si,
Ab uska her andaaz mere jakham sehlaane laga.

Quote from: "Saba_Saba"
yeh kya harash ji ..... aap ne bhi mood change kar diya....
aaiye aap ki mualaqat natkhat Saba se karwate hai ....tongue3


Yu armano par na tum sitam dhaao Harash
Ke niklenge dil se to aasma kam hai
Abhi ek hi thi baat teri aur meri
jo chal nikli to saara sama kam hai

Quote from: "harashmahajan"
haan theek kehti ho saba..kahaan bekaar ke shayaro main aa gayee na aap :D .....haan khayaal hamare mil ker bhi nahi milte...ye aapki soch hai....hum toh samjhe the ki aapki soch bulandiyaan chhoo rahi hai sad5 ...anyways...

Khijaan ayee jo kismat main,baharon ka bhi dum nikle,
Jahaan doonde hum arma ko wahaan arma hi kam nikle.

Quote from: "Saba_Saba"
Neha hai Princess21... mai unhe thanx keh rahi thi na ... tongue3

Waheed ...... thanxxxxxx ..... Moto bohat achhi lines likhi hai .... Usual Smile

Harash ji

aap ke aur mere khayal mil kar bhi nahi milte....

Kabhi veeran rasto par
koi anjaan si dastak
agar tum ko sunayi de
sada ki shakal me aakar kahe
mohabbat naam hai mera
palat kar dekhna mat tum
ke is kaar e mohabbat me
azeeyat hi azeeyat hai
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«Reply #59 on: January 17, 2006, 05:09:12 AM »
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aa gayeein aap....apni chhuttian bitaa ker... :D

surur kya hai saba tu ne na jana
Ik baar ho jaaye to phir tu batana
bara hi lutf hai un shikwon gilon main
jab feel karogi kisi ki kamsin jana. :D
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