Saawan beet na jaay!

by abdbundeli on July 28, 2012, 03:01:17 PM
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Aao barso aaj ghan,
Fasal rahee kumhlaay!
Bin barsey hee, ras-bharaa
Saawan beet na jaay!!

   - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 03:05:32 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 28, 2012, 03:01:17 PM
Aao barso aaj ghan,
Fasal rahee kumhlaay!
Bin barsey hee, ras-bharaa
Saawan beet na jaay!!

   - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli

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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 04:15:09 PM »
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Bhai Yaad dila di aapne hamare ganv ki...
Dil ko chhu gayi shayari aapki..
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 04:21:49 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 04:45:06 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2012, 05:04:59 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on July 28, 2012, 03:05:32 PM
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Quote from: Saavan on July 28, 2012, 04:15:09 PM
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Saavan' ji!
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2012, 07:00:31 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 28, 2012, 03:01:17 PM
Aao barso aaj ghan,
Fasal rahee kumhlaay!
Bin barsey hee, ras-bharaa
Saawan beet na jaay!!

   - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli



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«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2012, 12:02:13 AM »
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ati ati uttam
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ati ati uttam
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Bahut khoob Sir
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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2012, 12:14:28 AM »
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nice Ramwatiya jee
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«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2012, 06:29:54 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on July 28, 2012, 04:21:49 PM
nice

Thanks, 'Saahill' ji!
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Shukriyah, Saini ji!
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