::Saawan ki kaali ghata:: -Panna 7:Shairi for Manzar -e- Kudrat

waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #90 on: March 10, 2006, 11:04:58 AM »

thanxxxxxxxxxx Sonu mom.........nice again Sonu...JHl.........

Ashkon Ne Dil Ki Baat, Zamanay Mein Aam Ki
Afsos, Gher Ki Baat Kahan Tak Chalii Gayee....


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Sonu

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«Reply #91 on: March 13, 2006, 06:34:38 AM »

thanks jhl... wonderful her bar ki thra...

aitbaar kyon kijey jinhe
hum par aitbaar nahi
rah hi gaye tanha
jaisey they aaye yahaan tanha...

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Quote from: "Sonu"

jhl you r welcome...

jhlwonderful...

jis dil se mohabbat karta hai
phir kahne se kyon darta hai
jakhmon ko na yaad kar kal ke
dil khol ke bolta ja words pyar ke

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Quote from: "Sonu"

jhl thanks for giving me permision to just call you jhl... you r welcome... wonderful...

ajnabi hain raastey kaheen patthar toh kaheen kaante
pal bhi nahi milta jakhm bharne ka
phir kiss moa-d par ruqq kar hum inhe dikhaate

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Thanks Sonu and you are welcome too ...
And please stop using "Jee" at end of my name ...

Its for you Sonu ...

Dil ki aawaaz ko izhaar kehte hai,
Jhunki aankhon ko ikraar kehte hai,
Sirf paane ka naam ishq nahi hota,
Yaha kuchh khone ko bhi pyaar kehte hai ...(nm)

No need for thanks and all that ...
Thanks for appreciating my post ...

Its for you ...
Aapse ho na baat to hum fikr karte hai,
Har waqt apne aapse aapka zikr karte hai,
Aap jaise dost hame naseeb se milte hai,
Iska khuda se har waqt sukr karte hai ...

What fantastic one Sonu ...

Valueing a relationship is not merely done
by seeing each other everyday,
What counts is how much in our busy lives
we remember each other ...


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Sonu

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::Saawan ki kaali ghata::

«Reply #92 on: March 13, 2006, 06:40:25 AM »

u r welcome babo... thanks... wonderful...

khyeney suney mey umer gujer gaye
unko samjhaney mey jindgi chali gaye
dil ko zakham etney miley key ghav aj tak bharey nahi
jamaney ney etna rulya key ahkh sey ahsoon sukh gaye...

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

thanxxxxxxxxxx Sonu mom.........nice again Sonu...JHl.........

Ashkon Ne Dil Ki Baat, Zamanay Mein Aam Ki
Afsos, Gher Ki Baat Kahan Tak Chalii Gayee....


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #93 on: March 14, 2006, 02:16:44 PM »

Thanks a lot Waheed and Sonu ...
Nice one too both ...

Sometimes God pushes us to our limits,
He tests us beyond our Endurance,
Because he has greater faith in us,
Then we have in ourselves ...


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Sonu

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«Reply #94 on: March 23, 2006, 02:57:14 AM »

u r most welcome JHL....

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Thanks a lot Waheed and Sonu ...
Nice one too both ...

Sometimes God pushes us to our limits,
He tests us beyond our Endurance,
Because he has greater faith in us,
Then we have in ourselves ...


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #95 on: March 31, 2006, 03:17:17 PM »

Thanks for appreciation like all the time ...

Aapka saath hai to itna likh bhi paate hai,
Warna hamari aap logo ke bich aukaat hi kaha ...


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Sonu

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«Reply #96 on: April 03, 2006, 11:44:21 PM »

JHL ji you always most welcome...

hum to sath hai hi apkey... app likhtey acha hia esi leya sab apko appricatie kertey hia..
or hum sab yea per funn kertey hai to dubara aukaat words mat lana.. sabhi log bahut achey likhtey hai or hum koi maney huye chuney huye koi shair to hey nahi jeysey ki mirza galib yea or bhi log hungey.. hum sab apni dilu ki batey likhtey hai to yea per ea sab maynye nahi rakhta key kon kitna acha likhta hai.. yea per sabhi log bahut acha likhtey hai or dil sey likhtey hai esi leya sabhi log bahut acha likhtey hai...
yea per koi aukaat nahi dikhata apni bus apni dilu ki baat beyan kertey hai.. i hope dubara app yea word nahi use kreyngey...

and like always.. keep writing.. keep up the good work..
koi tenshion na lo apni dil ki batey beyan kertey jow bus.. yea mat sochu ke yea app sey bhi badey badey sahir hai yea per koi bhi phucha huya shair nahi hai sab ulta pulta likh ker apney words judtey hai jinmey sey mey bhi ek hoon.. Usual Smile

... so keep going

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Thanks for appreciation like all the time ...

Aapka saath hai to itna likh bhi paate hai,
Warna hamari aap logo ke bich aukaat hi kaha ...


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #97 on: April 05, 2006, 01:00:29 PM »

I am really very very sorry if i have hurt your feelings ...
I promise here i wont use that word again here ...
And afterall thanks for waking me up ...

Read this carefully ...

Phool to kya khaar ko bhi muskura ke dekhiye,
Har kisiko apne seene se lagake dekhiya,
Dekhne ke saath humko jaan na bhi hai agar,
Apne chehre par nazar apni lagaake dekhiye,
Aisa karne se bhala kya aaina darr jayega,
Aaine ke saamne kyu sar uthake dekhiye,
Bastiyo mein aag par bhar mein lagaa di aapne,
Ho sake to isko barso mein bujhake dekhiye,
Usne bhejke tasveer kehlaaya hame,
Isko duniya ki nigaaho se bachake dekhiye ...


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Sonu

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«Reply #98 on: April 06, 2006, 02:45:19 AM »

JHL its ok mujey vo word acha nahi lega tha jo apney use keya tha to meyney kha keo ki mujhey sidha kheyney ki adadt hai kesi key peth pechey kheyni ki adadt nahi hai app ka vo word mujhey acha nahi lega to meyney apko khey deya... ager meyri koi bat bori lagi hoo to sorry..

bahut acha likha hai apney keep up the good work...

sookhi padi hai daali moasam nahi
abhi tak hawaa ka koi jhonka nahi aaya
kya kahoon ik aas hi toh hai baaki
har waqt phir bhi...nazar aata hai tera saaya

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #99 on: April 08, 2006, 12:05:51 PM »

Thanks a lot Sonu and good job too ...

Aisi koi bhi aapki baat nahi jo hame buri lage,
Aapki muskaan hi buraai mita deti hai,
Socha hoga khuda ne tumhe banake ki,
Ab achhe insaan ko banana nahi kyunki yehi sabko achhaai sikha deti hai ...


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«Reply #100 on: April 08, 2006, 06:27:53 PM »

Bohat khoob waheed,sonu ji as always very touching,and JHL aapne bhi hamesha ki tarah bohat acha likha hai.

"Ghatayein saawan ki kyun mera peecha nahi chodtin,
main nahi bhool sakti use,main kyun nahi maanti,
banaya tha mohabbat ka ashiyan reton pe maine,
kya pata tha itna kachcha niklega mohabbat ka dhaaga."


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #101 on: April 09, 2006, 07:36:05 AM »

Thanxxxxxx Nidhi............. bahot khoob tumne likha.... sawan per aaj kal kuch jyada hi likh rahi ho tongue3


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Tosha

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Re: ::Saawan ki kaali ghata::

«Reply #102 on: April 09, 2006, 11:55:06 AM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

hi friends,
Aaj mujhe yaad aaya saawan khatam hone ho hai aur maine kuch likha hi nahi saawan pe tongue3

lol,so writing a bit on saawan Usual Smile

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"Kaali ghata saawan ki is saawan bhi chhai rahi,
teri kami hamesha ki tarah is saawan bhi rahi,

har saal agle sawan tere saath ki tamanna karti hun,
kaisi ye tanhaaiyon ki rut har saal mujhpe chhai rahi,

main akele kisi kone me tujhe yaad karti rahi,
dil me hamesha umeedon ki shama jalaaye rahi,

na aaye tum,aur shayad kabhi aaoge bhi nahi,
nadaani meri,hadh se zyada tujhe chahne lagi,

barish ki boondon me aansuon ko chupaaye,
teri tasveer haathon me liye nihaarti rahi,

nasamajh khud ko kahoon ya tumko kahoon,
pyaar andha hai,khud ko behlaane lagi,

ek nazar dekh,kaise tera intezaar kiya hai,
ek baar samajh to,kitna tujhe pyar kiya hai,

itna yakeen hai mujhe khudpe yaar mere,
mujhe jaan-ne ke baad na pher sakoge muh mujhse,

is saawan ki ek barish mere naam karke to dekh,
mere bina na beet sakega phir tumhara saawan ek."

yaar bahut accha likha hai :evil:


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Sonu

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«Reply #103 on: April 11, 2006, 03:48:51 AM »

your most welcome jhl ji.. bahut acha likha hai apney... shukriya...

humey bus teyri ek judaye mar gaye..
banayee thi jo rab ney keesmat bus uski humey khudaye mar gayee..
dil mey thi jo tasveer bus uski tanhayee mar gaye..
uski mithi batey ktatri ki trha bus humey uski ek achayee mar gaye....

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"


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Sonu

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«Reply #104 on: April 11, 2006, 03:52:56 AM »

thanks nidhi.. apney bhi bahut acha likha hai...

sawan ki ghata ek saya chud gaye
thi jo tasveer ek yaar ki vo hava ka jhukha ley udi..
humney jo banya tha mahobaat ka ashiyana usey ek zalim dukh ki cahya ley udhi..
jindgi ki door etni kachi thi key bus uski ek beyrkhi humko ley dubi.

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