samander odas hay

by chitralsony on April 26, 2009, 11:44:13 AM

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chitralsony

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tum jo khafa ho muj say to dahrti odaas hay
jhangal ojar ojar hain aur basti odaas hay
ornay lagay hain parinday bhi shaakh say
daikha jo yay kay her ek shajer odaas hay
ab kay baras jo barashain hoyi hain shehr may
lagta hay apni treh samander odaas hay
shiksta pa khari hun may manzel kay pas gu
rasta dikhayay kon kay sara alam odas hay
bin oskay to is jivan ko sehna muhal hay
sansain khafa khafa hain tu yay dil odas hay


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Talat

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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2009, 03:21:02 PM »

Bohot Khoob Taiba Sis... Bohot achcha likha hai aapne...Bohot khoob !!

Very nice reply Kaash Ji icon_thumleft


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deepika_divya

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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2009, 03:45:18 PM »

wah kya baat hai Taiba sis. bahoot hi khoob!

bahoot bahoot khoob Kaash Ji.


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Roja

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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2009, 03:54:22 PM »

Taiba sis aapne bahut accha likha hai


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chitralsony

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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2009, 05:49:07 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on April 26, 2009, 12:21:20 PM

Waah bahot acha likha hai aapne Chitral(Taiba) ji too touchy Applause

ek sher likh rahe hain hum asha hai aapko acha lage, ba-araam likhte hain ba-ifaat to nahi baistasna ho jayen vo to bhi dua door to nahi bakhair ho phir ye udaasiyan si kyun hain bandish nahi hai koi muskuraao to sahi

thank u so much kaash ji ,bhot khob bhot piyar sher likha hay app nay


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chitralsony

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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2009, 05:49:54 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on April 26, 2009, 03:21:02 PM

Bohot Khoob Taiba Sis... Bohot achcha likha hai aapne...Bohot khoob !!

Very nice reply Kaash Ji icon_thumleft

thank u so much behna


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chitralsony

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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2009, 05:50:51 PM »

Quote from: Roja on April 26, 2009, 03:54:22 PM

Taiba sis aapne bahut accha likha hai

thank u so much dear sis


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chitralsony

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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2009, 05:52:20 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on April 26, 2009, 03:45:18 PM

wah kya baat hai Taiba sis. bahoot hi khoob!

bahoot bahoot khoob Kaash Ji.

thank u behna ,


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yahiya

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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2009, 09:35:49 AM »

great work...!!!!
keep it up icon_salut


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chitralsony

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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2009, 09:43:52 AM »

Quote from: yahiya on April 27, 2009, 09:35:49 AM

great work...!!!!
keep it up icon_salut

thank u yahiya ji


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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2009, 09:45:13 AM »

Bohat Achche Chitra Ji,.


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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2009, 09:50:10 AM »

nice one chitral sony.........
aapn ebahut dil se likha hai shayad........

saagar oodaas hai aaj lehrein mil na paayi saahil se
isliye shayad moti uske kinaaro par aa gaye


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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2009, 02:24:47 PM »

Quote from: Azeem on April 27, 2009, 09:45:13 AM

Bohat Achche Chitra Ji,.

bhot shokriya azeem ji


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Re: samander odas hay

«Reply #13 on: April 27, 2009, 02:27:23 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 27, 2009, 09:50:10 AM

nice one chitral sony.........
aapn ebahut dil se likha hai shayad........

saagar oodaas hai aaj lehrein mil na paayi saahil se
isliye shayad moti uske kinaaro par aa gaye

app nay mehsoos kiya salil ji app ka bhot bhot shokriya shayed shyri jazbon kay izhar hi ka to nam hay na