samander odas hay

by chitralsony on April 26, 2009, 11:44:13 AM
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tum jo khafa ho muj say to dahrti odaas hay
jhangal ojar ojar hain aur basti odaas hay
ornay lagay hain parinday bhi shaakh say
daikha jo yay kay her ek shajer odaas hay
ab kay baras jo barashain hoyi hain shehr may
lagta hay apni treh samander odaas hay
shiksta pa khari hun may manzel kay pas gu
rasta dikhayay kon kay sara alam odas hay
bin oskay to is jivan ko sehna muhal hay
sansain khafa khafa hain tu yay dil odas hay
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2009, 03:21:02 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Taiba Sis... Bohot achcha likha hai aapne...Bohot khoob !!

Very nice reply Kaash Ji  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2009, 03:45:18 PM »
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wah kya baat hai Taiba sis. bahoot hi khoob!

bahoot bahoot khoob Kaash Ji.
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2009, 03:54:22 PM »
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Taiba sis aapne bahut accha likha hai  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2009, 05:49:07 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 26, 2009, 12:21:20 PM
Waah bahot acha likha hai aapne Chitral(Taiba) ji  too touchy   Applause Applause                                                 ek sher likh rahe hain hum asha hai aapko acha lage,                                ba-araam likhte hain ba-ifaat to nahi                                                         baistasna ho jayen vo to bhi dua door to nahi                                                          bakhair ho phir ye udaasiyan si kyun hain                                                                      bandish nahi hai koi muskuraao to sahi
thank u so much kaash ji ,bhot khob bhot piyar sher likha hay app nay
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2009, 05:49:54 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 26, 2009, 03:21:02 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Taiba Sis... Bohot achcha likha hai aapne...Bohot khoob !!

Very nice reply Kaash Ji  icon_thumleft
thank u so much behna
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2009, 05:50:51 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 26, 2009, 03:54:22 PM
Taiba sis aapne bahut accha likha hai  Applause
thank u so much dear sis
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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2009, 05:52:20 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 26, 2009, 03:45:18 PM
wah kya baat hai Taiba sis. bahoot hi khoob!

bahoot bahoot khoob Kaash Ji.
thank u behna ,
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2009, 09:35:49 AM »
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great work...!!!!
keep it up icon_salut
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2009, 09:43:52 AM »
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Quote from: yahiya on April 27, 2009, 09:35:49 AM
great work...!!!!
keep it up icon_salut

thank u yahiya ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2009, 09:45:13 AM »
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Bohat Achche Chitra Ji,.
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2009, 09:50:10 AM »
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nice one chitral sony.........
aapn ebahut dil se likha hai shayad........

saagar oodaas hai aaj lehrein mil na paayi saahil se
isliye shayad moti uske kinaaro par aa gaye
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2009, 02:24:47 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on April 27, 2009, 09:45:13 AM
Bohat Achche Chitra Ji,.
bhot shokriya azeem ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 27, 2009, 02:27:23 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 27, 2009, 09:50:10 AM
nice one chitral sony.........
aapn ebahut dil se likha hai shayad........

saagar oodaas hai aaj lehrein mil na paayi saahil se
isliye shayad moti uske kinaaro par aa gaye
app nay mehsoos kiya salil ji app ka bhot bhot shokriya shayed shyri jazbon kay izhar hi ka to nam hay na
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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2009, 09:19:41 PM »
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NICE WORK CHITRAL...
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