Shaam badhti chali

by S.hashmi on December 23, 2009, 07:09:16 AM
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                  Shaam badhati chali ummeedein ghatati chali
               Bachi ummeedon pe nakamiyon ka andhera chhaane laga.

                       Raat bhar tarkash mein teer daale
                subah chal pada musafir adhure safar ko sambhale

                    Ek aisa safar jo badhta gaya chalta gaya
                           jo ruk gaya bas tham gaya

                   Tamannaon se bhara tamannaon mein jee raha  
                   Tamannayen khatam na hui par aadmi mit gaya

                       Apne sabhi hamsafar ka dekh haal aisa
                  samajh mujh ko bhi hai 'Shabab' kuchh aane laga

                          Kaam mere kitne adhure pade par
                       Ek aur din mujhe alvida keh jaane laga

                      Shaam badati chali ummedein ghatati chali
                 Bachi ummedon pe nakamiyon ka andhera chhane laga
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2009, 09:22:54 AM »
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Good
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«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2009, 05:55:51 AM »
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Very nice creation Shashmi ji.bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2009, 12:46:59 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2010, 03:28:55 AM »
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Bahut achha likha hai Hashmi ji. Badi khubsoorat ghazal hai aapki.
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2010, 05:47:02 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on January 06, 2010, 03:28:55 AM
Bahut achha likha hai Hashmi ji. Badi khubsoorat ghazal hai aapki.
Shukriya Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2010, 09:09:35 PM »
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bhut acha likha hai Hashmi,:clap: Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2010, 09:25:01 AM »
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Quote from: J.Bhogal on January 12, 2010, 09:09:35 PM
bhut acha likha hai Hashmi,:clap: Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2010, 09:43:25 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Hashmi Sahab Applause Applause Applause
Keep Writing   Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2010, 05:43:05 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Hashmi hello love4 hello love4 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2010, 06:51:40 AM »
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shukriya Bhogal  ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2011, 08:15:31 AM »
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Quote from: S.hashmi on December 23, 2009, 07:09:16 AM
                  Shaam badhati chali ummeedein ghatati chali
               Bachi ummeedon pe nakamiyon ka andhera chhaane laga.

                       Raat bhar tarkash mein teer daale
                subah chal pada musafir adhure safar ko sambhale

                    Ek aisa safar jo badhta gaya chalta gaya
                           jo ruk gaya bas tham gaya

                   Tamannaon se bhara tamannaon mein jee raha   
                   Tamannayen khatam na hui par aadmi mit gaya

                       Apne sabhi hamsafar ka dekh haal aisa
                  samajh mujh ko bhi hai 'Shabab' kuchh aane laga

                          Kaam mere kitne adhure pade par
                       Ek aur din mujhe alvida keh jaane laga

                      Shaam badati chali ummedein ghatati chali
                 Bachi ummedon pe nakamiyon ka andhera chhane laga


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