Sotey naheen ho kabhee?

by abdbundeli on February 05, 2009, 09:58:39 AM
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Ghahraatey bhaadoun ki,
Gahree kaalii raatoun mein:
Jhilmilaatey jugnuoun mein:
Kyaa chamkaa kartaa hai?

Sach kahnaa!
Koun?
Un bholey patingoun mein,
Daraabanee raatoun ko,
Sundar banaataa hua,
Yuun damkaa kartaa hai!

Meyrey priya!
Jaaney kyoun,
Mujhey to,
Bas,
Kuchh aisaa lagtaa hai?
Jaisey,
Tumhaaraa hii apratim aalok,
Wahaan jagtaa hai!!
-   Aur, us maadhyam sey,
Tumhaaraa hii sahrudaya vyaktitwa,
Wahaan,
Rah-rah umagtaa hai!!
Kaisaa adbhut hai yah?
Kaisee sajagtaa hai?

Sotey naheen ho kabhee?
Bas, jagtey rahtey ho?
Kuchh bhi naheen kahtey ho?
Bas, sab kuchh sahtey ho!!

       - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2009, 12:45:57 PM »
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very nice, aur aapkee hindi tho... uff! kya kehna!
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2009, 12:53:33 PM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on February 05, 2009, 12:45:57 PM
very nice, aur aapkee hindi tho... uff! kya kehna!
Shukriyah anjaan dharkan ji!
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2009, 02:25:29 PM »
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Bohot Khoob likha hai Abd Ji...chah kar bhi koi jawab na likh paayi ki iska miyaar hi itna ooncha hai...Bohot Khoob !
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2009, 03:34:48 PM »
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Wah Waah, Kya Baat Hai Abd Bhai, Kamaal Ka Likha,.
Har Kavita Mein, Kya Khoob Rachnaayein Di Hai Aapne,.
Adbudh, Bemisaal Hai,.

Yunhi LIkhte rahiye,.
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2009, 04:40:36 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 05, 2009, 02:25:29 PM
Bohot Khoob likha hai Abd Ji...chah kar bhi koi jawab na likh paayi ki iska miyaar hi itna ooncha hai...Bohot Khoob !
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Celmira Ji! Meyrey paas bhi aapkee 'tippanee' kaa jawaab deyney ko shabd naheen hain!
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2009, 05:56:12 PM »
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really nice
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2009, 04:40:53 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 05, 2009, 03:34:48 PM
Wah Waah, Kya Baat Hai Abd Bhai, Kamaal Ka Likha,.
Har Kavita Mein, Kya Khoob Rachnaayein Di Hai Aapne,.
Adbudh, Bemisaal Hai,.
Yunhi LIkhte rahiye,.
Haardik Dhanyawaad, Bhaayi Jaanasheen ji!
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2009, 04:42:00 AM »
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Quote from: chitralsony on February 14, 2009, 05:56:12 PM
really nice
Thanks chitralsony ji!
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2009, 05:17:27 AM »
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abd Ji
Bahut khoob meri hindi itni achi nahin hai is liye bas nasamajhte huye bhi kah sakta hun acha kaha hai


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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2009, 05:33:46 AM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on February 16, 2009, 05:17:27 AM
abd Ji
Bahut khoob meri hindi itni achi nahin hai is liye bas nasamajhte huye bhi kah sakta hun acha kaha hai
javed
Thanks Javed ji!
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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2009, 05:48:54 AM »
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wah wah wah!! Bahoot khoob Abd ji
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2009, 07:36:41 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 16, 2009, 05:48:54 AM
wah wah wah!! Bahoot khoob Abd ji
Thanks a lot Pooja ji!
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2009, 10:30:49 PM »
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Nice one Abd Ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2009, 09:02:28 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 25, 2009, 10:30:49 PM
Nice one Abd Ji
Dhanyawaad Rajesh Harish ji!
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