subah se aaftaab dikhtaa naheeN........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on January 30, 2012, 06:33:23 AM
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subah se aaftaab dikhtaa naheeN
bevajah ye kabhee to chhuptaa naheeN

dhuNdh aisee naheeN keh chhaNt naa sake
tu jo aaye to koi tiktaa naheeN

bairee baadal se jaa mileeN booNdeN
chashm e nam hai keh ye barastaa nahee

kuchh hawaayeN bhee kam naheeN lekin
us pe aaNchal  hai jo thahartaa naheeN

le ke aatee naheeN khabar teree
rukh hawaaoN kaa kyuN badaltaa naheeN

barseN maddham magar ye barseN to
ab ghataaoN se dil bahaltaa naheeN



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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2012, 06:45:48 AM »
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wah mamta ji boht khoob.

 likhte to sab .hain yahan kalm se .

Lekin koi apsa dil se likhta nahi
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waah... bht bht khoob mamta di....
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waah bahut khoob likha hai kaabil-e-tareef Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2012, 07:23:30 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob kahaa badhai ho aapko
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2012, 01:13:24 PM »
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Shukriyaa Saahill! tum kuchh zyaadaa taareef to nahee kar gaye.hahahaha......jo bhee shairi kartaa hai dil se hee kartaa hai saaheb!
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2012, 01:29:50 PM »
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ur welcome mamta ji
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wah bahut khoob mamta ji ...
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2012, 02:04:45 PM »
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shukriyaa Priyaa!
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«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2012, 02:06:03 PM »
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very nice Mamta ji.
daad kubool kijiye.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2012, 02:06:53 PM »
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shukriyaa the soul shaker!
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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2012, 04:41:36 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Mamata ji
Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2012, 04:55:35 PM »
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waah Mamta mam
bht hu umdaa post likha aapne
daad daad
Quote from: mamta bajpai on January 30, 2012, 06:33:23 AM
subah se aaftaab dikhtaa naheeN
bevajah ye kabhee to chhuptaa naheeN

dhuNdh aisee naheeN keh chhaNt naa sake
tu jo aaye to koi tiktaa naheeN

bairee baadal se jaa mileeN booNdeN
chashm e nam hai keh ye barastaa nahee

kuchh hawaayeN bhee kam naheeN lekin
us pe aaNchal  hai jo thahartaa naheeN

le ke aatee naheeN khabar teree
rukh hawaaoN kaa kyuN badaltaa naheeN

barseN maddham magar ye barseN to
ab ghataaoN se dil bahaltaa naheeN



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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2012, 06:36:19 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa S F jee!
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«Reply #14 on: January 31, 2012, 06:51:47 AM »
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Bahot khoob Mamta ji achhit takhleeq hai. Apne takhayyul ka achha mezahira kiya aapne. Daad pesh karta hun.
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