The blue one

by brokenarrow_daiict on November 06, 2004, 02:51:57 PM

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brokenarrow_daiict

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I saw her rushing over the rocks
I saw her crawling across the woods
I saw her falling into the depths
I saw her rising onto the heights
I saw her as pure as His heart
I saw her fully mixed with dirt
I saw her being worshipped
I saw her being accused
I saw her wrecking huge buldings
I saw her helping build great structures
I saw her as a nature's gift
I saw her always drift
I saw her helping people live
I saw her bringing them to the End.


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Re: The blue one

«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2004, 11:12:16 AM »

Quote from: "brokenarrow_daiict"

Good lines!!!Brokenarrow ji!!


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myheart_ursonly

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Re: The blue one

«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2005, 08:07:13 PM »

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jus beautiful!! Usual Smile


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unicorn_girl

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The blue one

«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2005, 04:38:08 PM »

WELL THE EMOTIONS HERE ARE PRETTY GOOD , BUT I THINK THERE IS AN OVERSUSE OF THE WORDS " I SAW " may be adding something else there would make it more beautiful. tongue3