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<>*Ye Baarish*<> baarish ..uff ye baarish
kyunkar aati hai
kyun rota hai baadal
ise bhi kisiki yaad aati hai
meri tarah yye bhi ashk bahata hai
k kahin par baadh aajati hai
itna rota hai kiski yaad me
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2010, 04:57:51 PM » |
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Ek chhoti si koshish meri Yeh baarish nahi hai
Aansuon ka sailaab hai
Dharti se dhuaan uthta hai
Badal ki aankhen bojhal hoti hai
Aur aansuon ka bojh na seh pati hain
Bas yun hi aansu dharti par gir jate hain
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2010, 05:04:29 PM » |
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waahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2010, 05:06:14 PM » |
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Kyon jhooti taarif kar rahi ho
Aap jaisa to main nahi likhta hoon
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2010, 05:12:30 PM » |
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areeeeeee.......main jhut nahin bolti....
chahe to jisse puch lo.....
achcha hai to achcha hai..nahin hai to nahin hai
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2010, 05:43:28 PM » |
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Masterji man lijiye ache likha hai apace.......
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2010, 05:46:28 PM » |
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ab to koyal bhi meri side hai sir ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2010, 05:48:14 PM » |
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Ab hume koi shikayat nahi hai
Aur shikayat kare to kis se kare
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2010, 06:06:55 PM » |
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aisa kyun keh rahe hain aap
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2010, 07:48:41 PM » |
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Kasak Jee Aadaab....
kafi gehrai meiN gayi hai aap is baar, achcha likha hai.. thought's are excellent.... keep it up....
ZameeN ki tadap ka ahsaas us aasmaaN ko hota hai
Jalta hai jab zameeN ka seena to aasmaaN rota hai
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2010, 07:50:59 PM » |
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shukriya parwaz ji........apne aaj dil se pasand kiya hamari koshihs ko
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2010, 09:51:38 PM » |
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Nice thought kasak ji...
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2010, 01:10:42 AM » |
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2010, 04:55:03 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI KASAK DIL KI JI....
"YE BAARISH" KI HAI SAAZISH
JAB BHI AATI HAI
USKI YAAD LATI HAI
HAME KHUB RULATI HAI
AUR KHUB TADPATI HAI...
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2010, 05:02:58 AM » |
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Nice thought kasak ji...
thnx geet ji and kapil ji..... |
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