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KOYAL46
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Dekho Laut aaya hai phir se
Sakhee Ye barsaat ka mausam
Un bheegee-bheegee meethi-2
Tum se Mulakaaton ka mausam
Sakhee miltey they hum aate-jaate
Saavan k jhoole humko they milaate
Wo pal mujhe bhule nahi bhulate
Aaj Kyu nahi chalee tum aatee
Ye baarish ki thandi-2 phuhaar
Sakhee Kehti hai pukaar-pukaar
Bujhale aaj tan-mann ki agann
Aajaa tu naache hum ho k magan.
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2010, 04:24:12 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Priyanka-ji..........  You liked it I feel my effort is worth it...... accha hai re  |
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2010, 04:30:40 PM » |
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BAHUT ACHCHA LAGA KOYAL MOUSAM-E-BARSAAT KA NAGHMA..........
LO SAJ DHAJ KAR AAYEE BARSAAT
SURMAI MEGHON KI LAAYEE BAARAT
DHANI CHUNARIYA ODHE DHARTI
KOYAL SHOR MACHATI FIRATI
BOONDEN RAAG MALHAR SUNAYE
PAVAN MACHAL MACHAL LAHRAYE
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2010, 05:03:27 AM » |
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Dekho Laut aaya hai phir se
Sakhee Ye barsaat ka mausam
Un bheegee-bheegee meethi-2
Tum se Mulakaaton ka mausam
Sakhee miltey they hum aate-jaate
Saavan k jhoole humko they milaate
Wo pal mujhe bhule nahi bhulate
Aaj Kyu nahi chalee tum aatee
Ye baarish ki thandi-2 phuhaar
Sakhee Kehti hai pukaar-pukaar
Bujhale aaj tan-mann ki agann
Aajaa tu naache hum ho k magan
Nice creation .....Koyal Ji ! dil se daad ! |
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2010, 05:30:44 AM » |
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bht pyare lamhe ghum gaye nazar k samne ....aapki ye rachna padhke koyal.....
bht hi payra likha hai aapne
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2010, 05:12:35 PM » |
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Bahut hi khoobsurat kavita hai aap ki Koyal ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2011, 08:29:05 AM » |
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Aadaab,
Zaruri toh nahin ke jeeney ke liye sahara ho
Zaruri toh nahin hum jisey chahen vo hamara ho
Kuch kashtiyan doob bhi jaya karti hain
Zaruri toh nahin har kashti ka kinara ho
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2011, 09:26:22 AM » |
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Dekho Laut aaya hai phir se
Sakhee Ye barsaat ka mausam
Un bheegee-bheegee meethi-2
Tum se Mulakaaton ka mausam
Sakhee miltey they hum aate-jaate
Saavan k jhoole humko they milaate
Wo pal mujhe bhule nahi bhulate
Aaj Kyu nahi chalee tum aatee
Ye baarish ki thandi-2 phuhaar
Sakhee Kehti hai pukaar-pukaar
Bujhale aaj tan-mann ki agann
Aajaa tu naache hum ho k magan.
Behad pyari aur taazgii bhari kavita likhi hai koyal bahut khoob.. |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2011, 12:17:03 PM » |
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paani
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«Reply #11 on: July 20, 2011, 07:44:05 AM » |
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Dekho Laut aaya hai phir se
Sakhee Ye barsaat ka mausam
Un bheegee-bheegee meethi-2
Tum se Mulakaaton ka mausam
Sakhee miltey they hum aate-jaate
Saavan k jhoole humko they milaate
Wo pal mujhe bhule nahi bhulate
Aaj Kyu nahi chalee tum aatee
Ye baarish ki thandi-2 phuhaar
Sakhee Kehti hai pukaar-pukaar
Bujhale aaj tan-mann ki agann
Aajaa tu naache hum ho k magan.
bahut hi payari lines hai koyal.. just wow |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2011, 09:55:04 AM » |
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Thanks a lot Anshumali ji...... Nice creation .....Koyal Ji ! dil se daad !
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Sanjeev kash
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«Reply #13 on: July 20, 2011, 10:12:18 AM » |
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BhUat Khoob Peshkash rahi Koyal ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 20, 2011, 10:18:14 AM » |
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on eTI community..
