ye fizaa bhi baat karti hai..

by @kaash on March 02, 2009, 05:39:39 AM
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ye fizaa bhi baat karti hai
nadi ki khamoshi bhi umangen sunti hai
har taraf shor hai inke ehsaason ka
har insaan ko qudrat maseeha samajhti hai






ye vaadiyan ye ghataen kah rahi jaise
din me bhi sitaaron ka rasta dekh rahi jaise
qudrat ke lie har vaqt hi dua ka hota hai
andhere bhi ujaala hain ye kah rahin jaise

ye fizaa bhi baat karti hai..
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2009, 06:17:31 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2009, 06:21:04 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 02, 2009, 05:39:39 AM


ye fizaa bhi baat karti hai
nadi ki khamoshi bhi umangen sunti hai
har taraf shor hai inke ehsaason ka
har insaan ko qudrat maseeha samajhti hai






ye vaadiyan ye ghataen kah rahi jaise
din me bhi sitaaron ka rasta dekh rahi jaise
qudrat ke lie har vaqt hi dua ka hota hai
andhere bhi ujaala hain ye kah rahin jaise

ye fizaa bhi baat karti hai..


KAASH JREE..
NICE WAY OF PRESENTTAION....
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2009, 06:43:48 AM »
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Beautiful lines Kaash ji.. keep writing...
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2009, 12:59:42 PM »
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Very nice
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2009, 06:26:55 PM »
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Badi sunder jagah hai.......@kaash ji
ye tou batao kahan hai kahan hai ?
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2009, 10:27:03 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 02, 2009, 05:39:39 AM


ye fizaa bhi baat karti hai
nadi ki khamoshi bhi umangen sunti hai
har taraf shor hai inke ehsaason ka
har insaan ko qudrat maseeha samajhti hai




ye vaadiyan ye ghataen kah rahi jaise
din me bhi sitaaron ka rasta dekh rahi jaise
qudrat ke lie har vaqt hi dua ka hota hai
andhere bhi ujaala hain ye kah rahin jaise

ye fizaa bhi baat karti hai..

@kaash ji!

Sundar man ko praapt hai,
Sundartaa sarwatra!
Sammukh sundar kshitij, nag;
Uupar sundar chhatra!!

   - Ramwatiya / abdbundeli
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2009, 11:25:15 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 05, 2009, 10:36:41 AM

shukriya Abd ji...very nice lines...


sundar si saloni kalpinikta yathaarth se sarvada shreshtha hai
umangen mile jisse umangen de saken,jeevan vohi shreshtha hai
@kaash ji!
Hrudaya, hrudaya hai, laghu hrudaya;
Yah hai hrudayaakaah!
Sundar sey sundar miley;
Huaa asundar naash!!
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   - Ramwatiya / abdbundeli     
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2009, 08:53:27 AM »
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kaash ji,mujhe toh samaj mein nahi aata kaise aap ke tareef karu.
too good.very very nice.
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2009, 11:47:58 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 06, 2009, 08:44:04 AM
Nice lines Abd ji..
Thanks @kaash ji!
       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2010, 12:38:40 PM »
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Very nice poem hai Kaash ji ye aapki. Beautiful, marvelous.
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