कौन रखता है

by Raqeeb on December 06, 2012, 08:03:52 PM
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नये कमरों में अब चीजें पुरानी कौन रखता है|
परिंदों के लिए अब शहर में पानी कौन रखता है||
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2012, 08:26:42 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi accha janab magar ek narazggi hai ki aapne ise poora nahi likha
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2012, 01:08:02 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2012, 01:53:17 AM »
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bahoot khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 07, 2012, 02:26:06 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2012, 02:31:04 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2012, 05:50:15 AM »
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very nice....
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«Reply #7 on: December 07, 2012, 07:17:53 AM »
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Achha sher hai. Lekin dusra misra yun hona chahiye:
Parindon ke liye shahron mein paani kaun rakhta hai.
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 01:14:28 AM »
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Raqueeb ji congratulation nice post it is true
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