मन की लकड़ी -Panna 2:Shairi for Manzar -e- Kudrat

vimmi singh

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«Reply #15 on: October 18, 2012, 07:44:15 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Gaytri ji.......... Usual Smile


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vimmi singh

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Re: मन की लकड़ी

«Reply #16 on: October 18, 2012, 08:02:26 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 17, 2012, 06:54:29 PM

bahut bahut khoob Vimmi ji... ek dum masssttt....!!! Applause

mann roopi lakdi ko aaj tum jal jaane do
mann me jo baat hai use tum nikal jaane do

kab tak yun tadpoge, kab tak yun tarsoge
apne mann ko tum thodaa to pighal jaane do

mann jo ye chanchal hai, usko tum shaant karo
ladkhadaa jaaye agar, khud se sambhal jaane do

geeli mann roopi lakdi ko suraj ki taap se tum
thodaa sukh jaane do, thodaa tum gal jaane do

mann ka jo lakdi hai, aag usme jal jaane do
roko naa zubaan ko tum, usko aaj chal jaane do

*****HRIDAY*****

bahut bahut shukriya Hriday ji........ aapki daad ke liye aur aapke is posting k liye.............. Usual Smile


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vimmi singh

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Re: मन की लकड़ी

«Reply #17 on: October 19, 2012, 10:53:16 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 17, 2012, 07:12:56 PM

Vimmy Jee Aadaab!

Achche ahsaas kahe hai jee aapne... aur kavyatmak kshamta bhi
khoob hai aapke shabdoN meiN...

Humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aur gramaticaly thoda dhayan dijiye, means
muscunine and feminine words par... baki aapki lekhani behad
khoob hai..

Kapil Jee yaar KDK jee se hume bhi taleem dilwaa dijiye plz..
Instantly itna khoob kaise likhte haiN ...
Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob aapka reply behad khoob raha..

Humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

bahut bahut shukriya ParwaaZ ji Usual Smile