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Doston, aaj mujhe ek dost ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai jo mujhse naraaz ho gaya hai
galti shayad meri hi hai ...
is nazm ke zariye usse kehna chahti hoon ki uski dosti bahut khaas hai mere liye
shayad woh laut aaye mere paas.......
Aaj Rootha hua ik dost bahut yaad aaya
Achcha guzra hua kuch waqt bahut yaad aaya
Jo har lamha meri salaamati ki dua karta tha
aaj ek thokar lagi to bahut yaad aaya
Meri khushi mein apni khushi talaashta tha jo
aaj yeh ek hasi par woh bahut yaad aaya
Ek ashk se mere jaise thehar jaati thi uski duniya
aaj ek aansoo aankh mein aaya to woh bahut yaad aaya
Jise is dil ke kareeb paaya itna
aaj kuch door gaya to bahut yaad aaya
Mere wajood se hi mehak uth_ti thi duniya uski
aaj ek phool khila to woh bahut yaad aaya
Har mushkil mein jo saath tha mere saaya bankar
aaj dil zara pareshaan hua to woh bahut yaad aaya
Zindagi ki dhoop mein jo jalta tha yeh badan
aaj jab ise barsaat ne chua to woh bahut yaad aaya
Aaj Rootha hua ik dost bahut yaad aaya
Achcha guzra hua kuch waqt bahut yaad aaya........
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baadal102
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2010, 10:37:19 AM » |
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riyaz106
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2010, 10:38:06 AM » |
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Bahut beautiful poem likhi hai Kashish Ji aapne. Meri dua hai ke wo dost gile-shikwe bhulkar aapse mil jaye.Ek shere arz hai:
Yaaden Hain Kuch Aisi Tery Naam Se Wabasta
Har Subha Hai Jaisy Har Sham Se Wabasta
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diya786
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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2010, 10:43:06 AM » |
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Bahut beautiful poem likhi hai Kashish Ji aapne. Meri dua hai ke wo dost gile-shikwe bhulkar aapse mil jaye.Ek shere arz hai:
Yaaden Hain Kuch Aisi Tery Naam Se Wabasta
Har Subha Hai Jaisy Har Sham Se Wabasta
Shukriya Riyaz Sahab 
dua karne ke liye... dua karti hoon ki aapki dua mein asar aa jaaye
aapne bhi khoob likha hai janaab |
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2010, 10:57:22 AM » |
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BAhut Khub Kashish Ji Aur Hum Duaa Karenge Ki Wo Dost Jo Aapse Rutha Hai Wo aapke Pass Laut Aaye
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diya786
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«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2010, 11:04:09 AM » |
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BAhut Khub Kashish Ji Aur Hum Duaa Karenge Ki Wo Dost Jo Aapse Rutha Hai Wo aapke Pass Laut Aaye
Shukriya Rishi ji |
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2010, 11:18:37 AM » |
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Awesome.. Fantastic. Marvelous ....Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Kashish .. ak ak sher mano... ankahe jazbaato ko liye ho.. Too goo ... keep it Up. God Bless U and Khuda kare woh Roota hua dost Maan Jaaye  |
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mrZakram
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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2010, 03:25:46 PM » |
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bohot khoob kashish ji.Allah tala aap ke dost ko aap se milade(Ameen)ek sher arz hai.
haa main maanta hoo ke mujhse bhool hui hai,
lekin itni badi bhi nahi ke tum mujhe yun bhool jao.
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samir_bc
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«Reply #9 on: January 08, 2010, 04:15:20 PM » |
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nice creation kashish ji......................
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2010, 06:27:14 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Kasish Ji
Dua karta hoon rootha hua dost maan jaaye
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diya786
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2010, 10:21:23 AM » |
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Awesome.. Fantastic. Marvelous ....Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Kashish .. ak ak sher mano... ankahe jazbaato ko liye ho.. Too goo ... keep it Up. God Bless U and Khuda kare woh Roota hua dost Maan Jaaye
Allah kare ki tumhari dua mein asar ho jaaye... |
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diya786
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«Reply #13 on: January 12, 2010, 10:24:25 AM » |
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nice creation kashish ji......................
Thank you Samir Sahab |
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diya786
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«Reply #14 on: January 12, 2010, 10:26:28 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Kasish Ji
Dua karta hoon rootha hua dost maan jaaye
Shukriya Rajesh sahab |
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