AAKHRI SAANSEIN (2- 2 liners)........ "MohaN"

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AAKHRI SAANSEIN

1. Kehtee hain terey saath hee chaluun gee 'MohaN'
    Kyaa khoob saath nibhaatee hain aakhri saansein!


2. Peer honaa koi khoob naa sahee par peeri to anmol saathee hai dosto
    Dost gar saath chorh bhi dien to kyaa peeri jo saath de hee hai dosto...

Surindar. N                                  "MohaN"
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2016, 05:35:59 AM »
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Kya baat hai sirji...... Wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2016, 05:42:35 AM »
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Waah sir piri ko bahaana de diya..  Dil ko to kaafi taza tareen jawaan rakhte hai..
Aor vaise bhi piri me koi shak bhi nahi karta..... 

In ashaaron k lie...  Dhero daad meri taraf se...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2016, 03:45:49 PM »
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Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on February 27, 2016, 05:35:59 AM
Kya baat hai sirji...... Wah wah
bahut shukria Shikha Jee.
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Surinder Jee Aadaab ... !

Waah janab waah kia kahne ... First wala sher behad laajawab aur umdaa
huaa hai ... waqai shayri huyi hai ...

In khoob sher par humari dheroN daad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O Aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2016, 10:36:27 PM »
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AAKHRI SAANSEIN

1. Kehtee hain terey saath hee chaluun gee 'MohaN'
    Kyaa khoob saath nibhaatee hain aakhri saansein!


2. Peer honaa koi khoob naa sahee par peeri to nehmat hai dosto
    Sab dost chorh bhi dien to kyaa peeri jo saath de hee hai dosto...

Surindar. N                                  "MohaN"

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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2016, 06:41:14 AM »
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Bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: aarzoo-e-arjun on February 27, 2016, 05:42:35 AM
Waah sir piri ko bahaana de diya..  Dil ko to kaafi taza tareen jawaan rakhte hai..
Aor vaise bhi piri me koi shak bhi nahi karta..... 

In ashaaron k lie...  Dhero daad meri taraf se...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Arjun Jee.
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«Reply #10 on: February 29, 2016, 12:59:45 PM »
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वाह वाह बहुत खूब.
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Adil Jee.
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