Aao Bhule Shikwe........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on January 16, 2009, 04:42:24 PM
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Bohat doori na banao bohat door chale jayege
Hame aawaz bhi doge hum laut ke na aayege

Kahe ka tha jhagda tu mera nahi to kya tha
Bohat se sawaal hain jo, baad mere tujhe rulayge

Tu bada ya main bada, yeh kis soch me hain hum mubtila
Kya karega apne badappan ko, jab Khak hum ho jayege


Tere samne hu bhaitha GHAYEL hain nam mera
Aa muje gale laga le, hum tuje gale lagayege

                -Sajid Ghayel-

Everybody give me a big hugggggggggg i love u all kisi ke liye dil me koi shikwa nahi koi shikayat nahi.
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2009, 04:47:40 PM »
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Rite Bak at u sajid! Here's a big hug from my side ______________

Koi gila nahi koi shikwa nahi, ye dooreeyon kee bunyaad kya hai?
tutta hai dil tuttaen hain dil, inn dilon kee faryaad kya hai?
Maafi--- ghalteeyon kee, jo keen, aur wo bhi, jo nahi keen...
~Sidra Aarzu Ahmed
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2009, 04:51:18 PM »
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A BIG HUG BACK TO YOU "AD" HOPE WE ALL WILL USE THIS THREAD TO MAKE OUR FREINDSHIP MORE STRONG AUR AGAR DIL ME KUCH GILE SHIKWE HAIN BHI TO UNHE DOOR KAR DEGE MAY ALMIGHTY GOD BLESS MY EFFORTS "AAMEEN"
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2009, 07:14:27 PM »
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Bohat doori na banao bohat door chale jayege
Hame aawaz bhi doge hum laut ke na aayege

Kahe ka tha jhagda tu mera nahi to kya tha
Bohat se sawaal hain jo, baad mere tujhe rulayge

Tu bada ya main bada, yeh kis soch me hain hum mubtila
Kya karega apne badappan ko, jab Khak hum ho jayege


Tere samne hu bhaitha GHAYEL hain nam mera
Aa muje gale laga le, hum tuje gale lagayege

                -Sajid Ghayel-

Everybody give me a big hugggggggggg i love u all kisi ke liye dil me koi shikwa nahi koi shikayat nahi.

[/quote) GHAYEL BAHI AAJ ZAKHMI LAGTE HO,AAP KA AIK AIK HAF SACH HAI,LOELY POETRY.ASGHR Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2009, 07:17:08 PM »
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HAQEEQT PE MUBNI BAATAIN, LOVELY POETRY BAHI.ASGHR Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2009, 08:32:50 PM »
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thnak u asghr give me a big huggggggggggg may god always bless u.
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2009, 08:55:27 PM »
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A BIG HUG BACK TO YOU "AD" HOPE WE ALL WILL USE THIS THREAD TO MAKE OUR FREINDSHIP MORE STRONG AUR AGAR DIL ME KUCH GILE SHIKWE HAIN BHI TO UNHE DOOR KAR DEGE MAY ALMIGHTY GOD BLESS MY EFFORTS "AAMEEN"
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ameen!
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2009, 05:02:30 AM »
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kya baat hai gayelji.....

bahut doori na bana bahut door chale jayege,
dosti karne ka hai mauka, aa gale mil jaayege.

kahe ka jagdha,tu mera nahin toh kya tha,
phir toh kyu,tu mere aur me tere khawab mein atta tha.

tu bada ya mein bada,bada kuan hata hai,
jo gile -shikve chod gale milta hai.

tere saamne bhaitha hai GAYEL,aaj toh mujhse tu gale mil jaayega,
warna yeh dosti ka mauka khokar,tu GAYELA KHELAYEGA.

AA GALE LAG JAA............
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2009, 05:30:54 AM »
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Bohat doori na banao bohat door chale jayege
Hame aawaz bhi doge hum laut ke na aayege

Kahe ka tha jhagda tu mera nahi to kya tha
Bohat se sawaal hain jo, baad mere tujhe rulayge

Tu bada ya main bada, yeh kis soch me hain hum mubtila
Kya karega apne badappan ko, jab Khak hum ho jayege


Tere samne hu bhaitha GHAYEL hain nam mera
Aa muje gale laga le, hum tuje gale lagayege

                -Sajid Ghayel-

Everybody give me a big hugggggggggg i love u all kisi ke liye dil me koi shikwa nahi koi shikayat nahi.


Sabardast Mere Bhai Jhinjood diya tune jazbaath ko mere tumne  diloon ke mail ko saaf karne jo koshish ki hai allah kamiyaab karega !!allah tumhe khush rakhe aur meri uss galti ko maaf kardiya hoga tumne shayad jo maine plestine thread me ki thi tumhari ghazal ka matlab maine akele suncha to samjhme aya !!

Tera har hokum “GHAYEl” Sar ankhoon pe hoga !!
Zindagi ke har mood pe “Qadeer” teri rahoon me hoga !!
Teri mahobbath la fani kahelayegi “GHAYEL” !!
Tera naam tere baad subki duvaon me hoga !!

Tere kirdar ki misaal hogi teri maazi “GHAYEL”!!
Tera zikar tere baad kitaboon me hoga!!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2009, 07:05:32 AM »
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kya baat hai gayelji.....

bahut doori na bana bahut door chale jayege,
dosti karne ka hai mauka, aa gale mil jaayege.

kahe ka jagdha,tu mera nahin toh kya tha,
phir toh kyu,tu mere aur me tere khawab mein atta tha.

tu bada ya mein bada,bada kuan hata hai,
jo gile -shikve chod gale milta hai.

tere saamne bhaitha hai GAYEL,aaj toh mujhse tu gale mil jaayega,
warna yeh dosti ka mauka khokar,tu GAYELA KHELAYEGA.

AA GALE LAG JAA............

Here is a big Huggggggggggggggggggggg for u........the best thing i love about you is you always write beautiful lines for everybody aisa to main bhi nahi kar sakta You are just tooooooooooo goodddddddddddddd

I am so lucky to have a freind like you may god bless our freindship.
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2009, 07:11:58 AM »
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Sabardast Mere Bhai Jhinjood diya tune jazbaath ko mere tumne  diloon ke mail ko saaf karne jo koshish ki hai allah kamiyaab karega !!allah tumhe khush rakhe aur meri uss galti ko maaf kardiya hoga tumne shayad jo maine plestine thread me ki thi tumhari ghazal ka matlab maine akele suncha to samjhme aya !!

Tera har hokum “GHAYEl” Sar ankhoon pe hoga !!
Zindagi ke har mood pe “Qadeer” teri rahoon me hoga !!
Teri mahobbath la fani kahelayegi “GHAYEL” !!
Tera naam tere baad subki duvaon me hoga !!

Tere kirdar ki misaal hogi teri maazi “GHAYEL”!!
Tera zikar tere baad kitaboon me hoga!!

Qadeer Toopchi


Arey mere pyare se dost us baat ke bare me to main bhool bhi chuka hu aur woh tumhari galti nahi thi bas ek view tha tumhara aur maine bhi apna view sath me share kiya achche logh hamesha achchi batein share karte hain ek dusre ki galtiyaan nahi pakadte.

Tumhare zehan me mera khayal aaya yahi badi baat hain tumhari khoobsurat ghazlo me mera nam aana to bohatttttttttttttttttttttt badiiiiiiiiiiiiii cheeze hain

Aa yaar sab batein chod aur mere gale lag ja khuda hamari dosti hameshaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa banaye rakhe "AAMEEN"
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2009, 07:21:23 AM »
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Arey mere pyare se dost us baat ke bare me to main bhool bhi chuka hu aur woh tumhari galti nahi thi bas ek view tha tumhara aur maine bhi apna view sath me share kiya achche logh hamesha achchi batein share karte hain ek dusre ki galtiyaan nahi pakadte.

Tumhare zehan me mera khayal aaya yahi badi baat hain tumhari khoobsurat ghazlo me mera nam aana to bohatttttttttttttttttttttt badiiiiiiiiiiiiii cheeze hain

Aa yaar sab batein chod aur mere gale lag ja khuda hamari dosti hameshaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa banaye rakhe "AAMEEN"


Thanks A lot Sajid Salam Karta hon mai tera Kirdar aur buland sunch ko !! allah tumahara ye jazba qayam rakhe Ameen !1

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2009, 07:47:06 AM »
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Truly said and written very well...


Tujhse jab door honge to royenge na aansu bahayenge,
tere hai tere rahenge tere saath hi mitt jayenge,
Gile shikwe na hia tujhse na kabhi honge is zindagi me,
kabool kar mera nazarana, ye dosti hamesha nibhayenge...

a big hug from me tooo
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2009, 08:01:32 AM »
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Truly said and written very well...


Tujhse jab door honge to royenge na aansu bahayenge,
tere hai tere rahenge tere saath hi mitt jayenge,
Gile shikwe na hia tujhse na kabhi honge is zindagi me,
kabool kar mera nazarana, ye dosti hamesha nibhayenge...

a big hug from me tooo

Thank u so much Angel a big huggggggggggggggg from me too, god bless you and your beautiful poetries.
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2009, 08:19:08 AM »
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Waah,.
Bhaiyon,.
Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aap Sabne,.
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