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ye kalam ek dost ke naam jo filhal naraz hai... I just hope ki wo ise padh le
Beete hue palo ka ye sila rakhna..
Apne dil me na koi gila rakna...
Yado se meri na hona khafa..
Itni si meri iltaja rakhna..
Naadan si khataye mana bahut hui
Meri har Khata ki ek saja rakhna..
Khushiya tamam ho hasil use
E khuda! meri ye dua rakhna..
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«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2011, 09:51:53 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: April 12, 2011, 10:48:24 AM » |
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ye kalam ek dost ke naam jo filhal naraz hai... I just hope ki wo ise padh le
Beete hue palo ka ye sila rakhna..
Apne dil me na koi gila rakna...
Yado se meri na hona khafa..
Itni si meri iltaja rakhna..
Naadan si khataye mana bahut hui
Meri har Khata ki ek saja rakhna..
Khushiya tamam ho hasil use
E khuda! meri ye dua rakhna..
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acha kalaam hai manzil ji aur aapke dost ki narazgi ise padh kar INSHAALLAH khatam ho gaye gi |
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«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2011, 11:27:26 AM » |
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priya ji aacha likha he.....wese adhura laga.... lekin apne jo uper condition batayi he shayad usme esa hi kuch likha ja sakta he so mast laga....
....sach kahu to is se apke dost ki narajgi dur hoti he ya nahi iska to muje pata nahi per ha ...wo ise yaha read kare us se jayda behtar ye hoga ki aap use face to face ye ya fir esa hi kuch kah de.....i m sure ki wo fir naraj nahi rah sakta / sakti.....yakin maniyega chahe to try kar lo....
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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2011, 03:20:33 PM » |
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Priya di.. Allah kare woh shaks manjaye..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2011, 03:30:22 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2011, 06:19:42 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Priya Ji Bahut Sunder Likha Hai
Mein Duva Karunga Ki Apka Wo Dost Apki Ye Post Read Kare
Aur Wo Apase Ye Padhkar Kabhi Naraz Na Ho..
Aur Uttkarsh Bhai Ne Sahi Kaha Aap Use Face To Face Mana Lijiye
U hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye God Bless U
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2011, 02:07:17 AM » |
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Wah Wah Priya Ji Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aapne
Aapka Andaz e Bayaan Hume Bohat Pasand Aaya Ji
Dost Chahe Kitni Baar Bhi Roothe Use Manana Chahiye
Kyon Ki Qimti Mala Toote To Usse Phenka Nahi Jaata
Phirse Piroya Jata Hai.Aapki Sochko Mera Salaam Ji
Allah Se Dua Hai Aapka Dost Jaldi Maan Jaaye
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2011, 11:32:27 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2011, 12:03:10 PM » |
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ye kalam ek dost ke naam jo filhal naraz hai... I just hope ki wo ise padh le
Beete hue palo ka ye sila rakhna..
Apne dil me na koi gila rakna...
Yado se meri na hona khafa..
Itni si meri iltaja rakhna..
Naadan si khataye mana bahut hui
Meri har Khata ki ek saja rakhna..
Khushiya tamam ho hasil use
E khuda! meri ye dua rakhna..
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Bahut khubsurat kavita likhi hai priya ji dua hai ki apke dost ise padh le aur jald hi apni narazagi bhul jaye.. |
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2011, 01:29:34 PM » |
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acha h ki aaka wo dost hum nahi hain… warna hum to ise parhkar bhi apni naraazgi duur nai karte… qki humare jaise log jab naraaz hote hain to dost aur dushman me fark nai karte ji… joke kia sory don mind… aapne acha likha he… dusman b man jayenge ji wo to fir b dost hai  |
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2011, 01:52:40 PM » |
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duaon ka bht bht shukria adil ji... acha kalaam hai manzil ji aur aapke dost ki narazgi ise padh kar INSHAALLAH khatam ho gaye gi
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«Reply #13 on: April 15, 2011, 01:54:15 PM » |
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aapki advice ka bht bht shukria mg.. sahi kaha aapne... priya ji aacha likha he.....wese adhura laga.... lekin apne jo uper condition batayi he shayad usme esa hi kuch likha ja sakta he so mast laga....
....sach kahu to is se apke dost ki narajgi dur hoti he ya nahi iska to muje pata nahi per ha ...wo ise yaha read kare us se jayda behtar ye hoga ki aap use face to face ye ya fir esa hi kuch kah de.....i m sure ki wo fir naraj nahi rah sakta / sakti.....yakin maniyega chahe to try kar lo....
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«Reply #14 on: April 15, 2011, 01:55:03 PM » |
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duaon ka bht shukria rahim... god bless u... Bahaut bahaut khoob Priya di.. Allah kare woh shaks manjaye.. Khush rahiye..! |
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