***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

by kaushikbhawna008 on September 12, 2008, 05:04:25 AM
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THIS POETRY IS DEDICATE TO MY FRIEND


Duniya ki bheed mei na akela chod jaana mujhe
Ho sake to apne saath le jaana mujhe

Chod jaaoge jo mujhe tum tanha to dhundhoge
Kahi aur na sahi to apne dil mei chipa le jaana mujhe

Khushi hoon mei sada saath nibhaungi tumhara
Bas apne labo par sada muskaan banakar sajana mujhe

Gar tum kho bhi doge mujhe kahin ek roz
To na ghabrana bas ek baar awaaz lagaana mujhe

Ho sake to apne saath le jaana mujhe

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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2008, 05:12:47 AM »
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 Applause Applause

bhawana ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne
 
great lines... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2008, 05:15:47 AM »
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thnk u honey ji aapne padha aur pasand kiya
bohut bohut shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2008, 06:35:22 AM »
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THIS POETRY IS DEDICATE TO MY FRIEND


Duniya ki bheed mei na akela chod jaana mujhe
Ho sake to apne saath le jaana mujhe

Chod jaaoge jo mujhe tum tanha to dhundhoge
Kahi aur na sahi to apne dil mei chipa le jaana mujhe

Khushi hoon mei sada saath nibhaungi tumhara
Bas apne labo par sada muskaan banakar sajana mujhe

Gar tum kho bhi doge mujhe kahin ek roz
To na ghabrana bas ek baar awaaz lagaana mujhe

Ho sake to apne saath le jaana mujhe



Very Beautiful Work.. Bhawna..   Clapping Smiley
Very Innocent Dedication..
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2008, 08:42:48 AM »
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shukriya maahiya ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2008, 02:46:53 PM »
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bahut hi aacha aur
masumiat se bhara likha hai aap ne
bhawna ji.
good & touching lines



Baadal
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2008, 06:53:43 AM »
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Usual Smile Bahut Khub Bhawna ji...
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«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2008, 07:32:40 AM »
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Beautiful lines Kaushikbhawna ji....
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2008, 06:25:16 AM »
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shukriya pawan ji and natural ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2008, 06:35:39 AM »
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great efforts bhawna...nice emotion and pure feelings
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2008, 06:37:43 AM »
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thnk u sanjeev ji
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«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2008, 05:40:18 PM »
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KYUN HUME KISI KI TALASH HOTI HAI,
 KYUN DIL KO KISI KI AAS HOTI HAI,
CHAND KO DEKHO VO BHI TANHA HAI FIR BHI,
USKI CHANDNI SE ROSHAN RAAT HOTI HAI.........
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