apne saath le jaana mujhe

by kaushikbhawna008 on September 12, 2008, 05:04:25 AM

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kaushikbhawna008

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THIS POETRY IS DEDICATE TO MY FRIEND

Duniya ki bheed mei na akela chod jaana mujhe
Ho sake to apne saath le jaana mujhe

Chod jaaoge jo mujhe tum tanha to dhundhoge
Kahi aur na sahi to apne dil mei chipa le jaana mujhe

Khushi hoon mei sada saath nibhaungi tumhara
Bas apne labo par sada muskaan banakar sajana mujhe

Gar tum kho bhi doge mujhe kahin ek roz
To na ghabrana bas ek baar awaaz lagaana mujhe

Ho sake to apne saath le jaana mujhe


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honeyrose

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2008, 05:12:47 AM »

bhawana ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne

great lines...


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2008, 05:15:47 AM »

thnk u honey ji aapne padha aur pasand kiya
bohut bohut shukriya


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Shikha12

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2008, 06:35:22 AM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on September 12, 2008, 05:04:25 AM

Very Beautiful Work.. Bhawna.. Clapping Smiley

Very Innocent Dedication..


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2008, 08:42:48 AM »

shukriya maahiya ji


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baadal102

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2008, 02:46:53 PM »

bahut hi aacha aur
masumiat se bhara likha hai aap ne
bhawna ji.
good & touching lines

Baadal


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jempawan

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2008, 06:53:43 AM »

Bahut Khub Bhawna ji...


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natural

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2008, 07:32:40 AM »

Beautiful lines Kaushikbhawna ji....


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2008, 06:25:16 AM »

shukriya pawan ji and natural ji


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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2008, 06:35:39 AM »

great efforts bhawna...nice emotion and pure feelings


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2008, 06:37:43 AM »

thnk u sanjeev ji


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Preet R

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Re: ***apne saath le jaana mujhe***

«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2008, 05:40:18 PM »

KYUN HUME KISI KI TALASH HOTI HAI,
KYUN DIL KO KISI KI AAS HOTI HAI,
CHAND KO DEKHO VO BHI TANHA HAI FIR BHI,
USKI CHANDNI SE ROSHAN RAAT HOTI HAI.........