Chahe naye dost hon ya purane sab ek se hote hain

by @kaash on August 18, 2009, 10:26:53 AM
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chahe naye dost hon ya purane sab ek se hote hain
dosti ke rishte zamane ke tolmol se aage hote hain


hargiz nahi dosti me koi ek khaas hai hota
dosti maa hai aisi sabhi bachhe barabar jise lagte hain


khushmizaaji aur aazaad khyaali hi iske nagmon me basi
dosti me kabhi nahi ghamgeeniyat ke tarane hote hain


zindagi me khushi apno aur gairon me fark na karne se milti
kitne mubarak dosti ki duaon ke khazane hote hain


fakr o dua ka nata dosti se kabhi too.ta nahi
jaise bhi padhen dosti ke lafz dosti se bhare hote hain
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2009, 02:48:21 PM »
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@Kaash ji Dosti pe naya udaran diya hai aapne.
toda disagree hoti hu aapka likha second lines pe... tongue3

Overall very good lines  Applause Daad hazir hai ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2009, 03:04:31 PM »
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khub likha kaash sahab'
an enjoyable read
Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2009, 01:51:21 PM »
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bahot shukriya Roja ji and GR ji

thanks for yr words.

You are most welcome ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2009, 11:04:56 PM »
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good one kaash ji!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2009, 04:15:54 AM »
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kaaSh jee:

namaste!

bahot saHeeH farmaayaa hai aapne apnii koShiSh meN.. Khuub! liKhate raheN yuuNhi! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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