***Daaman***

by baadal102 on October 09, 2008, 08:46:24 AM
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Khali hai aaj tare yaar ka daaman,

Tujhe du to aaj main kya du,

Dua hai sirf hontho pe ek tare liye,

Aur pyar ke siwa tujhe du to kya du...



mare dosto bura nahi maan.na lakin yahi sachai hai humari(for those jinhe hum un ke mubarak mooko pe wish nahi ker paaye)

Baadal
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2008, 08:54:54 AM »
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 Applause

Wah wah baadal ji khoob likha hai aapne...


Muhabbat ki raahon mein phool bichaye
Aapni khushiyon se humare daaman mein sajaye
Dete ho itni khushi aapse kaise chupaye
Mera dil bhi tanha hai aapko kaise samjaye
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2008, 08:56:40 AM »
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Good Lines Baadal... Thumbs UP
and Nice Reply HoneyRose...
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2008, 09:00:25 AM »
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Khali hai aaj tare yaar ka daaman,

Tujhe du to aaj main kya du,

Dua hai sirf hontho pe ek tare liye,

Aur pyar ke siwa tujhe du to kya du...



mare dosto bura nahi maan.na lakin yahi sachai hai humari(for those jinhe hum un ke mubarak mooko pe wish nahi ker paaye)

Baadal

Bohot Khoob Baadal Applause

Nice lines Honey   icon_thumleft
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2008, 09:04:06 AM »
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Thank you Mahiya dear.. notworthy

Thank you Celmira sis.. notworthy
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baadal102
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2008, 09:31:02 AM »
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sukergujar hu aap sab ka

thanx mahiya ji

thanx celmira ji

& honey ji bahut aacha likha hai aap ne


Muhabbat ki raahon mein phool bichaye
Aapni khushiyon se humare daaman mein sajaye
Dete ho itni khushi aapse kaise chupaye
Mera dil bhi tanha hai aapko kaise samjaye






Baadal
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2008, 09:52:19 AM »
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meri yaad me jo na jee sako
mujko tum bhula dena
ho jayegi roshan kabr qayamat tak
ek chirag meri mazar pe jala dena

                           -sg-






Khali hai aaj tare yaar ka daaman,

Tujhe du to aaj main kya du,

Dua hai sirf hontho pe ek tare liye,

Aur pyar ke siwa tujhe du to kya du...



mare dosto bura nahi maan.na lakin yahi sachai hai humari(for those jinhe hum un ke mubarak mooko pe wish nahi ker paaye)

Baadal
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #7 on: October 10, 2008, 05:18:41 AM »
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bohut acha likha hai baadal ji Applause

and nice reply honey ji
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k.shael
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«Reply #8 on: October 10, 2008, 05:56:48 AM »
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VERY NICE BAADAL JI Applause,
& NICE REPLY HONEY DI Applause,
BY. K.SHAEL

SAB KUCH DE DIYA PHIR BHI AABHI
USE KUCH AUR CHAHIYE,
KEHTA HAI MERI KHUSHI KE LIYE TERA
EK AANSOO AUR GIRNA CHAHIYE...
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«Reply #9 on: October 10, 2008, 07:03:00 AM »
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yu to dene ko hamne unhe kya na diya
par hamei sirf bewafaai hi mili
jaanne waalon ne mere ghav par haath kuch yu rakha
ek tiis dil mei fir aur ubhar gayi
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«Reply #10 on: October 10, 2008, 10:37:44 AM »
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meri yaad me jo na jee sako
mujko tum bhula dena
ho jayegi roshan kabr qayamat tak
ek chirag meri mazar pe jala dena

                           -sg-


bahut hi aacha likha hai
aap ne sajid ji thanx a lot





Baadal
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baadal102
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«Reply #11 on: October 10, 2008, 10:39:10 AM »
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VERY NICE BAADAL JI Applause,
& NICE REPLY HONEY DI Applause,
BY. K.SHAEL

SAB KUCH DE DIYA PHIR BHI AABHI
USE KUCH AUR CHAHIYE,
KEHTA HAI MERI KHUSHI KE LIYE TERA
EK AANSOO AUR GIRNA CHAHIYE...


shael ji wah
bahut khoob
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Baadal
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baadal102
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«Reply #12 on: October 10, 2008, 10:40:39 AM »
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thanx a lot bhawna ji

yu to dene ko hamne unhe kya na diya
par hamei sirf bewafaai hi mili
jaanne waalon ne mere ghav par haath kuch yu rakha
ek tiis dil mei fir aur ubhar gayi



wah bhawna ji bahut khoob Applause Applause



Baadal
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«Reply #13 on: October 10, 2008, 10:41:19 AM »
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Shukriya aapka baadal ji,,,bhawna,,shally .... 
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baadal102
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«Reply #14 on: October 10, 2008, 10:53:35 AM »
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Ro dete to bahut aacha hota,

Daaman hamara bhigo dete to aacha hota,

Tis na rahti koi dil main tare,

Jakhm jo tune yaar ko dikha diya hota...






Baadal tearyeyed
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