Dear "Talat" , This Poetry is Dedicated To Your Loving Mother!!!!

by khwaish on January 29, 2010, 10:26:34 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 29, 2010, 04:02:51 PM »
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Zindagi Ka Har Lamha Kuch Yuh Guzar Jaayega
Aaj Ka Pal, Kal Sirf Ek tasveer Ban Kar Nazar Aayega...

Khuda Kare Tera Daaman Sada Khushiyon Se Bhara Rahe,
Rona Mat!!!! Varna Yeh Daaman Aansuuo Se Hi Bhar Jaayega...

Beeti Yaadon Ko Mehfooz Dil mein Apne Sametkar Rakhna "Talat"
Inn Yaadon Ki Baudalat Aane Wala Waqt Bhi Muskurayega....

Guzarish Sirf Itni Si Hai Ke Inn Ashko Ko Aankhon Se Juda Kardo "Talat"
Aap Muskuraoge To Ashk Ka Katra khud-Bhar-Khud Aankh Se Utar Jaayega...
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«Reply #16 on: January 29, 2010, 04:07:44 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 29, 2010, 04:02:51 PM
Zindagi Ka Har Lamha Kuch Yuh Guzar Jaayega
Aaj Ka Pal, Kal Sirf Ek tasveer Ban Kar Nazar Aayega...

Khuda Kare Tera Daaman Sada Khushiyon Se Bhara Rahe,
Ro Mat!!!! Varna Yeh Daaman Aansuuo Se Hi Bhar Jaayega...

Beeti Yaadon Ko Mehfooz Dil mein Apne Sametkar Rakhna "Talat"
Inn Yaadon Ki Baudalat Aane Wala Waqt Bhi Muskurayega....

Guzarish Sirf Itni Si Hai Ke Inn Ashko Ko Aankhon Se Juda Karte "Talat"
Aap Muskuraoge To Ashk Ka Katra khud-Bhar-Khud Aankh Se Utar Jaayega...

Ek aur umda shayari aapne sis k liye likha hai bhaiya. Mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai k mai kin shabdon mein meri talat ko tasalli du. Mai yehi dua karungi k kabhi b bacchon k ser se maa/baap ka haat chootna nahi chahiye. Baki upperwala hai  sad7

dear talat sambalna apne aapko. Time is the best healer. Isse jyada mujhe kuch kehna nahi aa raha hai.
Tere her dukh mein shamil mai hu
Mere saare sukh tere naam karu

God bless u.
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«Reply #17 on: January 30, 2010, 06:53:00 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on January 29, 2010, 03:44:15 PM
Khwaaish Bhai.. Dil Ko Chhoo gaye aapke Likhe Alfaaz.. Applause

Talat Di.. Zyada to Kya Kahun.. Basssss itna hi Kahunga Ki Ab Royega Mat.. Jaisa Ki Aapne Likha Ki Aap Roti Rahin..!!!Aise Waqt Kya Kahana Chahiye Mujhe Aata Nahi Di.. Bas Itna Kahunga Ki..

Aapki Ammi Aapke Sath Hain.. Bassss Yaadon Me Unhe Apne Sath Rakhne Ki Der Hai..!!


Phir Se Hausla Kar, Phir Se Khilkhila,
Tu Hansegi To Bahaare Phir Laut Aayengi..!!



**~** Mann **~**

Shukriya Mann Bhai..

Aur Aapne Bhi bahut Achi Baat Kahin..
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«Reply #18 on: January 30, 2010, 07:11:27 AM »
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Too good Khwaiash ji,aankh bhar aayi aapke gazal padkar ,great dedication for Talat ji.bahut dhuk hua padkar Talat ji aapke ammi ke baare mein,may her soul rest in peace.god bless you Talat ji.apna khayal rakhna.Khawaish ji bahut bahut shukriya aapne aise waqt mei apne dost ka saath diya.Samnoj ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. sad11
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«Reply #19 on: January 30, 2010, 09:32:09 AM »
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Khwaish Ji AApki dono hi Ranchan saraniye hai aur bahooot hi Sehaj tareeke se aapne apni baat kahi hai.. JO Hum sab kehna chah rahe the...
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«Reply #20 on: January 30, 2010, 11:59:38 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 29, 2010, 10:26:34 AM
Yeh Ghazal Main Khaas Taur Pe Mere Bahut Hi Ache Dost Talat Ke Liye Likh Raha Hoon,Jinhone kuch Hi Din Pehle Apni Ammi Ko Kho Diya..

Main Dil Se Yeh Ardaas Karta Hoon ke Unke Ammi Ko khuda Jannat Bakshe Aur Unhe Apne Reham-o-Karam ki Nazar Mein Rakhe..

Talat..Jaise Ki maine Aapko pehle Bhi Kahan Hai Ke Chalte Rehna Hi Zindagi Ka Doosra Naam Hai,Aur Hum insaan Isse Zyaada Aur Kuch Bhi Nahi kar Sakte..

Umeed Karta Hoon iss Ghazal Se Aapko Aage Chalte Rehna Ka Hausla Haasil Ho..

Shukriya..

Zindagi Hai Ek Veeran Safar
Iss Safar Mein Kuch palon Ko Dil Mein Sajaate Jaao...

Yeh Naa Socho ke Kya Khoya Hai Tumne,
Jo Hassil Hai Iss Safar Mein Usse Apnaate Jaao...

Awaaz Denge Tujhe Kal Dene Wale,
Aaj Apne Dil ko Apni Awaaz Banate Jaao...

Jis Maa Ka Aaj Tune Khoya Hai,
ussi maa ka Yeh sapna Raha Hoga Ke Tu Hardam Muskaati Rahe!!!!
Maa Ke Uss Sapne Ko Humesha Haqeeqat Banate Jaao...

Mehakte Hai Sirf Wahi Phool Jo Dhoop  Ko sehna Jaane!!!
Har mausam Mein Jo Jee Sake,Kuch Aise Phoolon Ko khilaate Jaao..

Manzil Par Pahunchna Hi Hai uss Musafir Ko,
Chaahe Laakh Raah Mein Deewar Uthate Jaao...

Eh dost Talat!!! "Khwaish" Yeh Dil Se Dua Deta Hai Tujhe!!!
Chaahe Zindagi Mein Kaise Bhi Halaat Ho ,Aap Bas Muskuraate Jaao....

                       ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~


Mein 'sampoorna hrudaya' sey bitia Talat key is 'apaar maatru-shok' mein, unkey saath-saath 'shokaakul' huun!
Mein ney jab (1-6-1970) apnee poojya maataa ji ko khoyaa thaa tab hi jaan liyaa thaa, ki, jab maan naheen hotee hai to kaisaa lagtaa hai!
Isliye mein bitia Talat key 'shok' kee gahraayee ko samajh saktaa huun! Meyree maan tab sirf 54 saal keen hi theen! Unhee key naam sey, mein ney apnaa eik pen-name 'Ramwatiya' (yaanee Ramwati kaa)rakh liyaa thaa!
Yahaan, mein, apnee eik poem, jo aisee hi eik mout, jaisee ki Talat bitia ki maataa ji ko 'prapt' huyee hai, jo dardnaak honey key saath-saath lagbhag waisee hi thee, jaisee eik aur mout kaa 'warnan' Goswami Tulsidas ji ney kiyaa hai:

"Raam charan drudhh preeti kar,
 Baali keenh tanu tyaag!
 Suman-maal jyoun kanthh sey,
 Girat na jaaney naag!!"

Talat bitia ki maataa ji bhi Allah-paak kaa, Khudaa-paak kaa naam leytey-leytey binaa kisee dard yaa khouf key hi, seedhey jaa UNKEY pahloonasheen huyeen, ki, har koyi deykhtaa hi rah gayaa!  'Panchee urhaa, aur apney duniyaabee aashiyaaney sey, eik lamhey mein hi, apney haqeeqee aashiyaaney jaa pahunchaa!'

Poem yuun hai:

The Ball:
That played so long,
Was shivering,
On the table of pingpong;
This side of the net!

Came rainy winds!
Oh, tornado it was!!

- That got a flowery lift:
That was the cause!

- That's now:
That side of the net!!!

With my heart-felt condolences! May the bereaved family get HIS blessings & support endlessly, and HER soul may rest in ETERNAL PEACE in the vicinity of the ALMIGHTY ALLAH!
                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #21 on: January 30, 2010, 03:54:21 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 29, 2010, 04:07:44 PM
Ek aur umda shayari aapne sis k liye likha hai bhaiya. Mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai k mai kin shabdon mein meri talat ko tasalli du. Mai yehi dua karungi k kabhi b bacchon k ser se maa/baap ka haat chootna nahi chahiye. Baki upperwala hai  sad7

dear talat sambalna apne aapko. Time is the best healer. Isse jyada mujhe kuch kehna nahi aa raha hai.
Tere her dukh mein shamil mai hu
Mere saare sukh tere naam karu

God bless u.


Shukriya Roja..Jo Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..Bas Koshish Yehi Kar Raha Tha Ke Talat Ko Kuch Hausla De sakoon..
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«Reply #22 on: January 31, 2010, 02:21:20 PM »
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Khwaish Ji Aapne Bahut Hi Sunder Aur Dil Ko Chunne Wale Jajbat Likhe Hai Padhkar Aankhe Nam Ho Gai Aur Talat JI Mein Duaa Karunga ki Aapki Ammi Ko Jannat Naseeb Ho

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«Reply #23 on: February 02, 2010, 01:26:33 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on January 29, 2010, 10:50:24 AM
Khwaish Dost.....mere paas lafz nahin aapke is gesture ke liye. Kitni hi der main baithi roti rahi aapki ye dedication padh kar.......Aap ne sahi kaha: Meri muskurahat main hi ammi ki muskurahat thi, meri har khushi main unki khushi thi, mere aansu unhe bechain kar dete the aur meri pareshaniyan unhe pareshan kar deti theen.....Allah se dua hai ki Wo unhe Jannat-ul-firdaus main oocha muqaam ataa farmaaye, ameen....Ammi na ho kar bhi har pal har lamha duaaon ki surat main saath hain.

Thank You so much Dost...aapke is gesture ne dil ko bohot tassali di hai.

DR SAHIBAA KHABAR SUN KAR AFSOS HUA....ALLAH APKI AMMI KO JANNAT- UL FIRDAUS ATAA KAREY ...AMIN...! AUR AAP KO SABAR DEY...!
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«Reply #24 on: February 02, 2010, 01:27:50 PM »
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BAHUT HI KHULOOS BHARA DEDICATION HAI KHWAISH SAHAB
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«Reply #25 on: February 02, 2010, 03:02:42 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on January 30, 2010, 07:11:27 AM
Too good Khwaiash ji,aankh bhar aayi aapke gazal padkar ,great dedication for Talat ji.bahut dhuk hua padkar Talat ji aapke ammi ke baare mein,may her soul rest in peace.god bless you Talat ji.apna khayal rakhna.Khawaish ji bahut bahut shukriya aapne aise waqt mei apne dost ka saath diya.Samnoj ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. sad11

Thankyou madhu..
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«Reply #26 on: February 02, 2010, 03:04:13 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on January 30, 2010, 09:02:22 AM
Khwaish ji very nice gesture by you n awesome poem.Applause Applause Applause Applause
n nice lines Sam ji n Mann dear
well it is sad to know about it.

Talat ji pls take care

May her soul rest in peace,God bless u
Yr Mom is with u

Maa kabhi bichhadti nahi uski yaaden saath rahti hain
jo kabhi banke dua kabhi banke sada paas rahti hain


Thankyou Kaashji..

Aur Aapne Bhi Bahut Achi Aur sachi baat Kahi..
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«Reply #27 on: February 02, 2010, 05:59:41 PM »
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.ALLAH APKI AMMI KO JANNAT ATAA KAREY ...AMIN...! AUR AAP KO SABAR DEY...!
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«Reply #28 on: February 03, 2010, 01:55:17 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 30, 2010, 09:32:09 AM
Khwaish Ji AApki dono hi Ranchan saraniye hai aur bahooot hi Sehaj tareeke se aapne apni baat kahi hai.. JO Hum sab kehna chah rahe the...



Shukriya Sophi Aapka,Jo Aapne is dedication ko padha aur saraha..
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Mein 'sampoorna hrudaya' sey bitia Talat key is 'apaar maatru-shok' mein, unkey saath-saath 'shokaakul' huun!
Mein ney jab (1-6-1970) apnee poojya maataa ji ko khoyaa thaa tab hi jaan liyaa thaa, ki, jab maan naheen hotee hai to kaisaa lagtaa hai!
Isliye mein bitia Talat key 'shok' kee gahraayee ko samajh saktaa huun! Meyree maan tab sirf 54 saal keen hi theen! Unhee key naam sey, mein ney apnaa eik pen-name 'Ramwatiya' (yaanee Ramwati kaa)rakh liyaa thaa!
Yahaan, mein, apnee eik poem, jo aisee hi eik mout, jaisee ki Talat bitia ki maataa ji ko 'prapt' huyee hai, jo dardnaak honey key saath-saath lagbhag waisee hi thee, jaisee eik aur mout kaa 'warnan' Goswami Tulsidas ji ney kiyaa hai:

"Raam charan drudhh preeti kar,
 Baali keenh tanu tyaag!
 Suman-maal jyoun kanthh sey,
 Girat na jaaney naag!!"

Talat bitia ki maataa ji bhi Allah-paak kaa, Khudaa-paak kaa naam leytey-leytey binaa kisee dard yaa khouf key hi, seedhey jaa UNKEY pahloonasheen huyeen, ki, har koyi deykhtaa hi rah gayaa!  'Panchee urhaa, aur apney duniyaabee aashiyaaney sey, eik lamhey mein hi, apney haqeeqee aashiyaaney jaa pahunchaa!'

Poem yuun hai:

The Ball:
That played so long,
Was shivering,
On the table of pingpong;
This side of the net!

Came rainy winds!
Oh, tornado it was!!

- That got a flowery lift:
That was the cause!

- That's now:
That side of the net!!!

With my heart-felt condolences! May the bereaved family get HIS blessings & support endlessly, and HER soul may rest in ETERNAL PEACE in the vicinity of the ALMIGHTY ALLAH!
                     - abd bundeli

Abd Ji,Aapne Tulsidas Ji ke Salok ka varnan bahut sahi Dang se Aapne Bataya..
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