Dil Udaas Hai......!!

by Talat on May 05, 2009, 07:06:29 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 07, 2009, 08:36:03 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 06, 2009, 04:37:38 AM
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Bohat khoob Celmira sis ... Thumbs UP

Bohat khoob khwaish ji

Aur sarvesh ji bohat khoob
 

Thanks a lot Honey Sis
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«Reply #16 on: May 07, 2009, 10:56:56 AM »
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Quote from: samnoj on May 06, 2009, 12:46:35 PM
bahut hi acha likha hai .. lekin bura bhi lag raha hai.. kyunki humbhi aapke dost hai aur ye likha hua humare liye bhi hai.. sorry dear huamaare hote hue aap udaas ho .. koshish rahegi aapko humesha hasaya jaye

Sorry Sam agar is poem se tumhe takleef hui...Mera maqsad apne pyare friends ko udaas karna nahin tha.....Maine is poem se bohot doston ka dil dukhaya hai....aur ab ye wada hai ki DOSTI pe humesha positive likhenge  icon_thumleft

Thanks for reading and appreciation Sam...and thanks for your friendship Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: May 07, 2009, 11:14:35 AM »
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ye hui na baat.. waise humara bhi ye wada hai ki aap kuch bhi likho hum positive comments hi denge
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«Reply #18 on: May 07, 2009, 03:20:37 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 06, 2009, 04:04:16 PM
Bahut khoob likha hia Talat aapne. It was something which really illusioned me.

Equally good poem by Khwaish Ji too as usual..
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Thanks so much Angel...Thanks for the lovely appreciation dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: May 07, 2009, 03:29:25 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 07:06:29 PM
Shayad kuch rishte itne mazboot nahin the.....Shayad hum hi bharam main jee rahe the !!!



bht khoob aur bht sacha likha hai apne Talat icon_salut....aur apki poem bi bht achi thi Khwaish g...!!! Applause
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«Reply #20 on: May 07, 2009, 03:52:40 PM »
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wow Talat di kya kamal ka likha hai... bahoot hi umda

Aur Khwaish ji aur Kaash ji aur Sarvesh ji.. kya reply kiya hai.. wah wah
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«Reply #21 on: May 07, 2009, 04:10:49 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 05, 2009, 10:22:25 PM
Waah waah Talat ji kya khoob likha hai..behad acha kalaam aisa laga padhke ki thoda aur likhti aap..coz itna acha likha aapne..awesome poem Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley ..

ek koshish                                                                                                                   

dost kabhi kahin nahi jaate...
jo chale jate hain hume chhod ke...
kuch to vo hume aur kuch hum bhi unhe nahi samajh pate....
par vo jaane ke baad dil ko apni yaad de jate hain,
aur jo vo nahi rahte paas to yaad ban hume rulate hain..
aisi saugaat hume de jate hain,
har ashq ke baad naye aa jate hain,
par jab unme se kuch khushnuma yaad leke aate hain,
hum har su vasl-e-bahaar pate hain,
zindagi me zindagi ko pate hain,
aur tab aansoo bhi muskurate hain,
kyunki vo khushi ke palon me hi aate hain

bahoot khoob Kaash ji
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«Reply #22 on: May 07, 2009, 06:04:18 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 06, 2009, 05:29:23 PM
Bahut accha likha hai dear Talat.... Last para toh bahut sahi aur accha likha aapne. Daad hazir hai dear

Thank You so much Roja dear for reading my work and appreciating it..Thanks.
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«Reply #23 on: May 07, 2009, 06:06:45 PM »
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Quote from: samnoj on May 07, 2009, 11:14:35 AM
ye hui na baat.. waise humara bhi ye wada hai ki aap kuch bhi likho hum positive comments hi denge

Ek baar phir se bohot shukriya dost Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: May 08, 2009, 02:49:46 PM »
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Quote from: Sadia Raja on May 07, 2009, 03:29:25 PM
bht khoob aur bht sacha likha hai apne Talat icon_salut....aur apki poem bi bht achi thi Khwaish g...!!! Applause




Thanks so much Sadia dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: May 08, 2009, 02:50:24 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on May 07, 2009, 03:52:40 PM
wow Talat di kya kamal ka likha hai... bahoot hi umda

Aur Khwaish ji aur Kaash ji aur Sarvesh ji.. kya reply kiya hai.. wah wah

Thanks a lot Divs Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: May 09, 2009, 05:33:54 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 07:06:29 PM
Shayad kuch rishte itne mazboot nahin the.....Shayad hum hi bharam main jee rahe the !!!




bhut hi khoobsurat nazm so touchy talat ji..........very very nice work.........keep it up.........
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«Reply #27 on: May 11, 2009, 06:01:05 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 07:06:29 PM
Shayad kuch rishte itne mazboot nahin the.....Shayad hum hi bharam main jee rahe the !!!




Bahoot bahoot khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dosti ke maayne ko jante hai hum,
Kon hai yaha begana pehchaante hai hum,
Mana kuch khata huyi hai hum se ae-dost,
Par saare zamane me tujhe hi apna maante hai hum!
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«Reply #28 on: May 12, 2009, 05:35:03 PM »
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Hello Talat,
Bohot bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!  very very impressive...

It is a long poem and normally you do not right too many long poems.
(something different from you)

It is a good thing that you cleared as this is not for one of your
friends. Before I read that, I thought it is for me.

Khwaish, Kaash & Sarvesh,
Very good replies from all of you...
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«Reply #29 on: May 13, 2009, 06:40:06 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 09, 2009, 05:33:54 AM
bhut hi khoobsurat nazm so touchy talat ji..........very very nice work.........keep it up.........

Shukriya Nawazish Aslam Ji
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