***dost bankar hi de rahe sab zakhm hain***

by kaushikbhawna008 on September 08, 2008, 10:11:22 AM
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Aaj fir dil mei  ho raha kuch dard hai
Ek dost k haatho fir khaaye kuch zakhm hain

Dost samajh jise apna sab kuch hamne tha dia bata
Aaj wahi de rahe hamei kuch naye zakhm hain

Kuch nahi bohut kuch chipaya tha usne
Aur keh rahe hai ki hamne sab kuch hai dia bata

Kya karu kisse kahu aur jaa kisse karu mein shikwa
Jab apne hi ban gair hamei de rahe naye zakhm hain

Dost ban mera dil mei kuch aise the wo bas gaye
Yuhi haste haste mere sab armaano ko khushi khushi hi kuchal gaye

Ae rab na fir kabhi dena mujhe yu daga na banne koi fir dost mera
Dost bankar hi mujhe dei rahe sab zakhm hain
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2008, 10:18:06 AM »
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bahut hi aacha likha hai bhawna ji

ye dhoke dil pe sahe hai ro ro ke



Baadal
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2008, 10:23:24 AM »
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thnk u baadal ji and sahi kaha aapne ye dhoke hamne hamesha dil par ro ro kar hi sahe hain na jaane fir bhi kyu ye dil fir bhi aitbaar karne lagta hai yahi sochkar ki shayd ye zakhm aakhiri ho ye imthaan aakhiri ho  sad5
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2008, 06:35:14 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai bhawna dear...
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2008, 09:58:39 PM »
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bahoot khoob bhawna, good work!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2008, 11:29:46 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Bhawna ...Agar duniya main bure log hain, to achche logon se bhi khali nahin hai duniya....
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2008, 12:54:26 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Bhawna Ji

Yeh zamana hi aisa hai
Jis ko bhi vishwaas karo
Wahi zakham de jata hai

Yeh to hui wahi baat
Ki mukh pe Ram Ram
Bagal Mein Chhuri
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2008, 01:01:05 AM »
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NICE LINES RH
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2008, 01:10:30 AM »
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Thanx Pooja Ji
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Sonia01
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2008, 01:12:06 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on September 08, 2008, 10:11:22 AM


Aaj fir dil mei  ho raha kuch dard hai
Ek dost k haatho fir khaaye kuch zakhm hain

Dost samajh jise apna sab kuch hamne tha dia bata
Aaj wahi de rahe hamei kuch naye zakhm hain

Kuch nahi bohut kuch chipaya tha usne
Aur keh rahe hai ki hamne sab kuch hai dia bata

Kya karu kisse kahu aur jaa kisse karu mein shikwa
Jab apne hi ban gair hamei de rahe naye zakhm hain

Dost ban mera dil mei kuch aise the wo bas gaye
Yuhi haste haste mere sab armaano ko khushi khushi hi kuchal gaye

Ae rab na fir kabhi dena mujhe yu daga na banne koi fir dost mera
Dost bankar hi mujhe dei rahe sab zakhm hain


bahut dard hai bhawna ji.. bahut accha dard bayan kiya hai aapne. accha laga padkar.
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2008, 01:14:01 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 08, 2008, 12:54:26 AM
Bahut Khoob Bhawna Ji

Yeh zamana hi aisa hai
Jis ko bhi vishwaas karo
Wahi zakham de jata hai

Yeh to hui wahi baat
Ki mukh pe Ram Ram
Bagal Mein Chhuri

itna b karab nahi hai Rajesh bhai.. phool bi hai aur kante bi hai.. waise hi accha dost bi hai aur zakham dene wale dost bi hai...50-50 .... tongue3
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2008, 01:18:52 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on November 08, 2008, 01:14:01 AM
itna b karab nahi hai Rajesh bhai.. phool bi hai aur kante bi hai.. waise hi accha dost bi hai aur zakham dene wale dost bi hai...50-50 .... tongue3
Mana ki hai 50 - 50
Par pata lage ki kaun se 50
Agar na laga pata ki kaun 50
Yahi to kar dete hai naak Chipty
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