Dost teri dosti

by klaskar on April 01, 2010, 11:37:56 PM
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Hasraton ko kuchalte huye zindagi k safar pe chala tha mai,
Tamannaon ka kabra khodte huye har pal chala tha main,
Is jahaan k saare rishte saare bandhan ko bhulate huye chala tha main,
Dost teri dosti ka amrit bin piye marne chala tha main...
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2010, 03:29:24 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 01, 2010, 11:37:56 PM
Hasraton ko kuchalte huye zindagi k safar pe chala tha mai,
Tamannaon ka kabra khodte huye har pal chala tha main,
Is jahaan k saare rishte saare bandhan ko bhulate huye chala tha main,
Dost teri dosti ka amrit bin piye marne chala tha main...
Waah!!!!! bhai Kapil Ji, bahut sundar likha, kahtey hai "A friend is one who knows your faults, yet loves you in spite of your virtues"..
Safar mein zindgi ke akele chala tha main,
Ek dost kya mila ki wahi rahnumaa hua.!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2010, 06:08:22 AM »
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Nice creation Kapil ji. Achhi koshish hai.
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2010, 08:34:14 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 02, 2010, 06:08:22 AM
Nice creation Kapil ji. Achhi koshish hai.
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2010, 08:37:52 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Pandey ji...aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai... n thanx once again...!!!

Quote from: drpandey on April 02, 2010, 03:29:24 AM
Waah!!!!! bhai Kapil Ji, bahut sundar likha, kahtey hai "A friend is one who knows your faults, yet loves you in spite of your virtues"..
Safar mein zindgi ke akele chala tha main,
Ek dost kya mila ki wahi rahnumaa hua.!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2010, 09:56:14 AM »
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goooooooood .klaskar ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2010, 12:26:18 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji...!!!

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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2010, 09:12:42 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 01, 2010, 11:37:56 PM
Hasraton ko kuchalte huye zindagi k safar pe chala tha mai,
Tamannaon ka kabra khodte huye har pal chala tha main,
Is jahaan k saare rishte saare bandhan ko bhulate huye chala tha main,
Dost teri dosti ka amrit bin piye marne chala tha main...

Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2010, 05:45:07 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

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Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
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