Dosti , friendship

by vishnu29 on August 23, 2007, 08:34:05 PM
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jaise phoolon ko rang kaliyon ko pani chahiye humko
 jeene ke liye sirf teri dosti chahiye
 
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2007, 06:45:47 PM »
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vishnu G
kuch kavita ka rang dijiye
adhuri si lag rahi hai ye to Usual Smile

:D :D :D
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2007, 11:26:45 PM »
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sahiba ji koi toh samjai nah kaise how can i improve  help toh mangi hai mujhe bhi kuch kum lagi thi    kya  aap help karenge  

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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2007, 11:27:23 PM »
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sahiba ji koi toh samjai nah kaise how can i improve  help toh mangi hai mujhe bhi kuch kum lagi thi    kya  aap help karenge  

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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2007, 05:06:02 PM »
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vishnu G waise to main likhti nahi , mujhe shayari padhna acha lagta hai
lekin yaha aap se keh sakti ki ap aur logo ki shayari padhe aur wahan tukbandi kare toh apko shartiya badhiya experience milega Usual Smile

apki lines mein kuch badalne ki koshish karu...

Jaise phoolon ko khushbu chahiye mehakne k liye
Parindo ko awaaz chahiye chehekne ki liye
kuch isi tarah chahiye hume teri dosti jeene k liye


koshish ki hai per ho sakta hai itni achi naa ho
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2007, 01:20:26 PM »
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Quote from: "Sahiba Zehra"
vishnu G waise to main likhti nahi , mujhe shayari padhna acha lagta hai
lekin yaha aap se keh sakti ki ap aur logo ki shayari padhe aur wahan tukbandi kare toh apko shartiya badhiya experience milega Usual Smile

apki lines mein kuch badalne ki koshish karu...

Jaise phoolon ko khushbu chahiye mehakne k liye
Parindo ko awaaz chahiye chehekne ki liye
kuch isi tarah chahiye hume teri dosti jeene k liye


koshish ki hai per ho sakta hai itni achi naa ho


Acchi koshish ki aapne Sahiba Madam... Usual Smile
Yu hi likhte rehna.
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«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2007, 05:23:41 PM »
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sab ne bahut khoob likha hai very nice

jaise sitaro ko chahiye raat
usi tarha aap ko chahiye madad ke liye kuch alfaaz
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