Dosti Ke Badalte Rukh

by syednaami on April 19, 2009, 09:40:21 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 30, 2009, 03:47:03 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 22, 2009, 06:59:03 PM
waah sayednaami..
kyaa baat hai jee...
Pandit bhaya, kahan ho, aapki nawazish jo aaye... Shukriya...
Quote from: honeyrose on April 24, 2009, 04:54:02 PM

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Syed ji aapne bohat khoob likha hai 
yuhi likhte rahiye Great lines ...
Miss you lotsss Syed ji....
Honeyrose sahiba, aap ko bare dinon baad dekha hai, achha laga... Bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #16 on: May 03, 2009, 05:24:06 AM »
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Shukriya Syed ji ...

Lafz aap do geet hum banayenge.....
Manzil aap pao rasta hum banayenge......
Khush aap raho khushiya hum dilayenge......
Aap bas dost bane raho dosti hum nibhayenge..

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«Reply #17 on: May 03, 2009, 05:28:28 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on April 19, 2009, 09:40:21 AM
Bare dinon bad khud izhar-e-khayal karne ko dil chaha, so aap logon ki khidmat men yeh ghazal paish kar raha, doston ko behad pasand ayegi... Shukirya


Kuchh anjane men kisi ne hamen sataya hoga,
Kuchh anjane men hamne kisi ko rulaya hoga...

Rishton ke khel men apne paraye hote hain,
Kuchh Parayon ko hamne bhi dil se lagaya hoga...

Dukh to hota hai chehron ke badal jaane par,
Khair aisa keh kar hamne hi unka dil dukhaya hoga...

Baat chhoti ko bari banne men der kahan lagti hai,
Isi tarah doston ne hi kuchh baton ko barhaya hoga...

Bigri ko ham hi bar bar banaate rahe dil se,
Shayad doston ko bhi kabhi aisa khayal aya hoga...

In baton se dil ko hi milti hai takleef bahut,
Bas dosti karke hamne khud ko hi zara sataya hoga...

Bane the dost jo kal aaj bhi dost hain apne liye,
Lagta nahin kyun Naami ko bhi unhonne dost banaya hoga...


-!Syed!-

bahoot sunder sayed ji..khoob likha hai aapne Applause
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«Reply #18 on: May 03, 2009, 05:34:36 AM »
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Dosti mein aapko kya jawab doon
Iss pyar ke rishte mein kya tohfa doon
Aapke dosti mein hum gulab dete magar
Joh kudh gulab ho unko kya tohfa doon

 
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«Reply #19 on: May 03, 2009, 05:40:18 AM »
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Behtareen Peshkash hai Syed Sahab
Bahoot Khoob likha Aapne Applause Applause Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #20 on: May 04, 2009, 02:44:13 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on April 19, 2009, 09:40:21 AM
Bare dinon bad khud izhar-e-khayal karne ko dil chaha, so aap logon ki khidmat men yeh ghazal paish kar raha, doston ko behad pasand ayegi... Shukirya


Kuchh anjane men kisi ne hamen sataya hoga,
Kuchh anjane men hamne kisi ko rulaya hoga...

Rishton ke khel men apne paraye hote hain,
Kuchh Parayon ko hamne bhi dil se lagaya hoga...

Dukh to hota hai chehron ke badal jaane par,
Khair aisa keh kar hamne hi unka dil dukhaya hoga...

Baat chhoti ko bari banne men der kahan lagti hai,
Isi tarah doston ne hi kuchh baton ko barhaya hoga...

Bigri ko ham hi bar bar banaate rahe dil se,
Shayad doston ko bhi kabhi aisa khayal aya hoga...

In baton se dil ko hi milti hai takleef bahut,
Bas dosti karke hamne khud ko hi zara sataya hoga...

Bane the dost jo kal aaj bhi dost hain apne liye,
Lagta nahin kyun Naami ko bhi unhonne dost banaya hoga...


-!Syed!-

Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Last 4 lines...  Thumbs UP

Aap Yu Hi Apni Dosti Ada Karte Rahiye
Aayega Wo Bi Pass Tere Ek Din

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Kahi pada tha maine ye sher yahan share kar rahi hu.

Is duniya me dost kam milenge,
Is duniya me gham hi gham milenge,

Jaha duniya nazar fer legi,
Us mor pe dost tumhe Hum Milenge
Cheer Up... Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: May 05, 2009, 04:03:12 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 03, 2009, 05:24:06 AM
 

 
Shukriya Syed ji ...

Lafz aap do geet hum banayenge.....
Manzil aap pao rasta hum banayenge......
Khush aap raho khushiya hum dilayenge......
Aap bas dost bane raho dosti hum nibhayenge..

NM
Honeyrose saahiba, nawazish shukirya, aur kya bahtreen ashaar paish kiye aapne...

Quote from: bekarar on May 03, 2009, 05:28:28 AM
bahoot sunder sayed ji..khoob likha hai aapne Applause

Bhaya sahib, bas aap ki kami thi, woh bhi puri hui, aap ne mere hosle buland kar diye. Shurkiya...
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«Reply #22 on: May 05, 2009, 04:09:08 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on May 03, 2009, 05:40:18 AM
Behtareen Peshkash hai Syed Sahab
Bahoot Khoob likha Aapne Applause Applause Applause


Dear Shivam, aap aye mujhe khushi hui, shukriya janab...

Quote from: Roja on May 04, 2009, 02:44:13 AM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Last 4 lines...  Thumbs UP

Aap Yu Hi Apni Dosti Ada Karte Rahiye
Aayega Wo Bi Pass Tere Ek Din

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Kahi pada tha maine ye sher yahan share kar rahi hu.

Is duniya me dost kam milenge,
Is duniya me gham hi gham milenge,

Jaha duniya nazar fer legi,
Us mor pe dost tumhe Hum Milenge
Cheer Up... Usual Smile

Roja saahiba, aap ki tashreefaavari ki meherbaani, aur aap ki sharing pasand ayi. Shukriya...
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«Reply #23 on: May 06, 2009, 03:27:15 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 05, 2009, 04:03:12 PM
Honeyrose saahiba, nawazish shukirya, aur kya bahtreen ashaar paish kiye aapne...

 

Shukriya Syed ji ....  notworthy


Dosti men khushiyan hi khushiyan hai
Yaqeen se dil lagao to janat hi janat hai
Dosti na mange sona chandi ya shaan
Dosti mein hoti hai dilon ki zuban.   
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«Reply #24 on: May 06, 2009, 03:42:27 AM »
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Dost ban ban ke mile mujhko mitaane vaale
Main ne dekhe hain kai_rang badalane vaale
Tum ne chup rahake sitam aur bhi dhaayaa mujhapar
Tumase achchhe hain mere haal pe hansne vaale

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«Reply #25 on: May 06, 2009, 04:09:38 AM »
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very very nice syednaami ji,
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