Dosti ki tadap

by valini on December 04, 2005, 06:35:07 AM
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Dosti ki tadap ko dikhaya nahi jaata,
Dil mein lagi aaghon ko Bhujaya nahi,
kitne bhi doori ho dosti aap jaisi dosth ko bhulaya nahi jaata[/quote]
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2005, 05:41:54 PM »
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tere dil dya mitra tu jane,
mere dil vich dharkan teri hai,
tu jina chir mera yaar ,
menu ohni umar batheri hai.


this is 4 u valini
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valini
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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2005, 10:34:55 AM »
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Your poem is very nice and :D  thank you so much for replying  Usual Smile
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2005, 03:24:16 PM »
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well thanks for appreciating me to0

the next is also for u

hope u like it to0
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2005, 03:28:00 PM »
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Aj dil di kehn nu g karda,
tere dil wich rehn nu g karda,
khushia de k tenu tere dard sehn nu g krda,
rab jane tera mera ki rishta ,
bas tenu apna kehn nu g karda
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2005, 09:57:27 AM »
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BADNAM N HONE DENGE, MERI ZINDAGI ME SURAJ NIKLE N NIKLE, TERI ZINDAGI ME KABHI SHAM N HONE DENGE.
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2005, 10:00:28 AM »
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DUA KARATE HAIN DOST SIR JUKA KE TU APNANI MANJIL   KO PAAYE , AGAR TERI RAHON MEIN ANDHERA AAYE TO ROSHNI KE LIYE KHUDA HUM KO JALAYE Usual Smile :p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:pp:p:p:p:p:p:p:p:pp:p:p:p:p:Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2005, 02:21:52 PM »
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Phulan bina na baghi bhar hundi;
 kaliyan bina na haar proye jande;
 maapiaa bina na kade sukh milda;
yaara bina na dukhre roye jande.
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valini
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«Reply #8 on: December 16, 2005, 10:32:33 AM »
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Zindhagi mein hameesha naye log melenge,
kahin pe zyaada toh kahin pe kum melenge
Aeitbar zara soch kar karna,
mumkin nahin har jagah tumhe hum milenge
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«Reply #9 on: December 17, 2005, 09:56:20 AM »
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gr8 all of u.... keep it up.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2006, 02:51:15 PM »
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Dosti ki tadap ko dikhaya nahi jaata,
Dil mein lagi aaghon ko Bhujaya nahi,
kitne bhi doori ho dosti aap jaisi dosth ko bhulaya nahi jaata
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Nice one valini, Keep posting!  Usual Smile
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nikki
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«Reply #11 on: January 27, 2006, 02:55:50 PM »
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gud work Valini n Burning...
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tajinder
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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2006, 11:46:43 AM »
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Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Phulan bina na baghi bhar hundi;
 kaliyan bina na haar proye jande;
 maapiaa bina na kade sukh milda;
yaara bina na dukhre roye jande.


dum diteyan bajh na dum milde,
dhone dummaan bajh na dhoye jande,
bina khushi de haseya nhi janda,
rone guman bajh na roye jande,
dardaan dina na sine chek(hole) pende,
chekaan bajh na moti proye jande,
bina maapeyan na kade v laad hunde,
dukhde dostaan bajh na sunaye jande.
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2006, 08:44:52 PM »
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tere dil dya mitra tu jane,
mere dil vich dharkan teri hai,
tu jina chir mera yaar ,
menu ohni umar batheri hai.


this is 4 you valini



wah kay abaat hai, bahoot hi dil se likha hai Jeet.... very touching lines..

Preet ki reet yahi
bin dibaar koi geet nahi
beete jo zindagi bin dilbar
wo zindagi koi zindagi nahi
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«Reply #14 on: July 01, 2006, 08:46:23 PM »
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Aj dil di kehn nu g karda,
tere dil wich rehn nu g karda,
khushia de k tenu tere dard sehn nu g krda,
rab jane tera mera ki rishta ,
bas tenu apna kehn nu g karda


wah kaya baat hai...

dil ke hai rishty
bin baat jud jaate hai
wo ayye sath na ayye beshaq
khayal unke hamesha sung rah jaate hai
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