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prempagla
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Kahi Unkahi Batoon ki ada hai Dosti
Har Ranjho gam ki dava hai dosti
Zameen par kami hai pujne walo ki
Varna is zameen par khuda hai Dosti.
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2004, 07:00:17 PM » |
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:lol: Tota na Toti na Toti ke par oye Prem bewaqqof tu shayri na kiya kar... lolzzzzzzzzzzz kaisi rahi....  ....tere ball pe sixer :lol: |
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2004, 09:54:39 PM » |
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Kahi Unkahi Batoon ki ada hai Dosti
Har Ranjho gam ki dava hai dosti
Zameen par kami hai pujne walo ki
Varna is zameen par khuda hai Dosti.
(NM) is jameen par to khuda hai prem  |
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prempagla
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2004, 03:39:57 PM » |
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roz kahti ho mere sher churaye nishita........
aaj tumne mera sher mara hai........
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2004, 09:07:10 AM » |
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Umdi aisi ho jo jeene ko majbur kare..
raah aisi ho jo chalne ko majbur kare..
mahek kam na ho kabhi apni dosti ki..
dosti aisi ho jo milne ko majbur kare..
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2004, 11:19:49 AM » |
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Umdi aisi ho jo jeene ko majbur kare..
raah aisi ho jo chalne ko majbur kare..
mahek kam na ho kabhi apni dosti ki..
dosti aisi ho jo milne ko majbur kare..
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2004, 06:55:14 PM » |
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Kahi Unkahi Batoon ki ada hai Dosti
Har Ranjho gam ki dava hai dosti
Zameen par kami hai pujne walo ki
Varna is zameen par khuda hai Dosti.
(NM) a very nice poem! :D |
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2004, 07:40:49 PM » |
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Kahi Unkahi Batoon ki ada hai Dosti
Har Ranjho gam ki dava hai dosti
Zameen par kami hai pujne walo ki
Varna is zameen par khuda hai Dosti.
(NM) Waah Prem ji!! Very Nice!!! Aur sabhi hain Khoon ke rishte,
Yaari Dilon ka Rishta hai!
Jo yeh Rishta Samajh gaya,
Bus woh Insaan farishta hai!(NM) |
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2004, 07:46:19 PM » |
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beautiful kumar ji!
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«Reply #10 on: December 31, 2004, 04:29:11 PM » |
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very nice prem and arun ji!
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«Reply #11 on: December 31, 2004, 05:39:22 PM » |
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Thanx Nidhi ji!!! |
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«Reply #12 on: December 31, 2004, 06:00:34 PM » |
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Dost hai to aansuon ki bhi shaan hoti hai.....
Dost na ho to mehfil bhi shamshaan hoti hai.....
Saara khel to dosti ka hi hai....
Warna janaza aur baraat ek samaan hoti hai.....N/M
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«Reply #13 on: December 31, 2004, 06:04:21 PM » |
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Waah! Kya baat Kahi hai!!! Namkeen ji!! Very Nice!!!
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«Reply #14 on: December 31, 2004, 06:07:48 PM » |
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Thankyou arunji........
Har karz dosti ka ada kaun karega........
jub hum na rahenge to dosti kaun karega........
bhagwaan mere dost ko salamat rakhna........
warna mere jeene ki dua kaun karega.......
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